Part time job

I've done had two part-time jobs before. I worked at bakery and pasta restaurant.

I did my part-time job in Paris Baguette, the most famous bakery in Korea. However, despite their its fame, I received lower less money than minimum wages. I just had to do work at the counter job, arrange breads, recommend a cake for to a customers, make some drinks, and clean the store while smelling tasty breads. Although the intensity of the work was not that high, I quit because of the low wages.

And then I then worked in at a pasta restaurant near my school. While the chef was nice, some of the workers hazed me at first, so I had a really hard time. However, I overcame the hazing and adjusted to the atmosphere. I am a cheerful and positive girl, so and I can be a good friend with to them. The good best point part of working in at that restaurant is that i I could eat whatever pasta whatever I want as a meal. Especially, I especially loved their rose rosé pasta.

These days, I'm I do not doing have a part-time job. Instead of working, I buy lottery tickets and dreaming of turning my life around. lol Ha ha.

And then I worked in pasta restaurant near my school. 

Instead of 'And then', you should pick 'next' or 'after that'.

And then is something you usually use in the middle of a sentence.

It's really good!