In the Park

Today I went to a park. It had been a while since I went to a park for the last time besides even though I love the place it. I was missing it. Missing I longed to be there, alone, with no cell phones, no internet connection conexion, no Facebook messages popping out on my mobile screen. Being there after a long period away of this kind of activitie from the place made me realize how difficult it is to quiet relax myself. I got used to be always awakened to all any "news" beeping away as they entered my phone. coming from all time and fast. Maybe Perhaps, we are driving this too fast on this road of life. too fast and Despite of the advancement of technology claiming to make our lives easier, advances we are still human. s, We still need some to get unplugged, and be disconnected from time to time.

Hello Paulo! Corrections are below. I have also added in some comments on alternative ways you could have said something, that would sound more native English. Overall, very good!

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In the Park

Today I went to a park. It had been a while since I went to a park for the last time besides I love it [Here, you might say: "It has been a while since I went to a park even though I love them"]. I was missing it parks [here, I wonder if you mean a specific park? If you are talking about a specific park, you can say "I was missing it", if you were missing parks in general, you would say "I was missing parks", but probably more "I was missing my visits to parks"]. Missing to be there, I was missing being in parks alone, with no cell phones, no internet conexion connection, no facebook messages popping out on my mobile screen. Being there after a long period away of this kind of activitie activity made me realize how difficult is to quiet myself. I got used to be always wake watching for any "news" coming, from all time and fast. Maybe we are driving this life too fast and despite of technologics technological advances we are still humans, we need some unplugged, desconnected time.

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I agree! I think I'll disconnect and go hang out in a park now...