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Letter About A Party For Neighbour Dear neighbor, Let me introduce myself, my name is Mohammad, I work in IT field and recently I moved to Amman at BT1 building near from the garden. Due to this, we -my family and me are planning to do a party next week. We would offer several homemade dishes, snacks, juices and some nuts. In addition, there will be music time with our favorable friend Mr. Hani. Moreover, we are sure; this party will give us a good opportunity to know each other’s, and to know our local representatives as well. So that, we would like to invite you to join us at our new home on Thursday at 7:00 PM, tell that time see you then. I hope everybody come in and join us, but if anybody decide not come for any reason we hope the noise not disturb you. Looking forward to see you, as this Party gives both of us the opportunity to be good friends. Yours faithfully, Mohammad

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Letter About A Party For Neighbour

Dear neighbor,

Let me introduce myself. My name is Mohammad, I work in IT field and recently I moved to Amman at BT1 building, near from the garden.
Due to this, we -my family and me I are planning to do a party next week. We would will offer several homemade dishes, snacks, juices and some nuts.
In addition, there will be music time with our favorable close friend, Mr. Hani.
Moreover, we are sure; this party will give us a good opportunity to get to know each other’s, and to know our local representatives as well.
So that Therefore, we would like to invite you to join us at our new home on Thursday at 7:00 PM, tell that time see you then.
I hope everybody come in and can join us, but if anybody anyone decides not to come for any reason, we hope the noise will not disturb you.
Looking forward to see you, as This party gives both of us the provides opportunity for us to become good friends, and we are looking forward to seeing you!


Yours faithfully,
Mohammad

 

Ahmad,

This is very good English writing! I like how your letter was clear and polite. Some of the things I changed are not necessarily incorrect, I just modified some phrases to make your writing flow a little better.

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Letter About A Party For Neighbour

Dear neighbor,

Let me introduce myself, my name is Mohammad, I work in the IT field and recently I moved to the BT1 building near the garden.   My family and I are planning to hold a party next week. There will be some homemade dishes, snacks, juices and nuts.
In addition, there will be a chance to hear music played by our kind friend Mr. Hani.
We hope this party will give us the chance to get to know each other, and to meet our local representatives as well.
So, we invite you to join us at our new home on Thursday at 7:00 PM.
We hope everybody will come in and join us but, if you are not able to come for any reason, we hope the noise will not disturb you.
We are looking forward to see you, as this party gives us the opportunity to develop our friendship.


Yours faithfully,
Mohammad

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Well, you could say "we hope to see you then!" but it's kind of redundant so I would be inclined to just leave it out.
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I meant,see you at the party time
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I don't understand what you mean by "tell that time see you then. "

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