Could You Help Me Correct My Preface???!!!!

I was born and raised in Ha Tinh province. Now, I am studying and working in Hue Province. I first came to Hue to study two years ago. When I arrived, I was really astonished by almost every aspect of life here because the lifestyle is very different from the way of life in my hometown – Ha Tinh province. Ha Tinh is not a province with famous tombs and the ancient Imperial city but it is still an interesting place with a lot of exotic and unusual sights. I am constantly wanting to write to express my feelings, my impressons regarding what I have experienced and what has astonished me. But I was not able to write much because I do not have neither sufficient motivation nor a clear goal for my writing. Now, thanks to teacher Hoang Tinh Bao and Cross Culture Communication Subject, my writing ambitions are being realized. Although my research has not been able to cover all the differences between the cultures of Ha Tinh and Hue provinces, it does point out some of the most frequently recognized differences.  Hopefully, other students will find this study interesting and will be motivated to look for other differences on their own.

I want to express my gratitude to teacher Tran Huy Bao who helped me organize and complete my study.
Student
Nguyen Diem Hang