my first eesay essay

I am Alisa, a common ordinary (两个字带有的语言色彩略有差别：common是常见，ordinary是普通) girl living in China.
I am glad to be here to learn although I'm new here. (这个句子语法没错但是逻辑有点问题 - “我是新人” 和 “我很高兴可以学习” 的对立成分好像不太重，想一下 - 这个句子的出来的结论就是 - “如果我不是新人，我在这里学习就不会很高兴”。你可以说 - Even though I'm new here, I'll do my best to learn English! - 其包含的含义包括 - 虽然我是新人，而且可能很多东西都不会，但是我仍然会尽我所能学好英语！)
My English is not good so that will take I might make a lot of mistakes.
If you can help me correct my entries I would be very grateful.

My first eesay essay

I am Alisa, a common an ordinary girl living in China.
I am glad to be here to learn although I'm new here. I am new here and I'm looking forward to learning English.
My English is not good so that will take I might make a lot of mistakes.
If you can help me correct my English, I would be very grateful.

my first eesay

I am Alisa, a common girl living in China.
I am glad to be here to learn although I'm new .
My English is not good so that will take a lot of mistakes.
If you can help me, I would be very grateful.