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亲爱的儿子,不要灰心 (还有英语版) 其他人都一看你就以为你仅仅是另一个正常的十三岁的男生,他们看不到你在心里的秘密。 我一看你就知道你与别人不一样, 我知道你所有的困难。 其他人都一看你就设想一个办不到的未来,我一看你就不能想象一个不同的未来。 其他人一看你就看到一个负担,我一看你就看到我的幸福。 亲爱的儿子,不要灰心,长得像其他人一样并不是一件绝妙的的事。 即使别人都避开你,妈妈永远都会在你的身边。 Other people all look at you and think you're just another regular 13 year old boy, they can't see the secrets in your heart. I look at you and I know you are not the same as all the others, I know all your difficulties. Other people look at you and see an impossible future, I look at you and can't imagine another. Other people look at you and see a burden, I look at you and see my happiness, My dear son, don't be discouraged, being like everyone else really isn't all that great. Even if everyone else turns their back on you, mama will always be with you.

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妳的翻译已经很棒了,至少是很流畅能完全表达文义的翻译了 其他几位的修改也很棒,但那是比较偏向文艺气息的修饰, 所以你也许会看到有些中文字词在英文原句里并没有相对应的字句出现。
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亲爱的儿子,不要灰心 (还有英语版)

其他人都一看你就以为你仅仅是另一个正常的十三岁的男生,他们看不到你在心里的秘密。

别人一看你,就简单的认为你和另外正常的十三岁男孩一样,其实他们看不到你内心的秘密。
我一看你就知道你与别人不一样, 我知道你所有的困难。

我一眼就看到了你与别人的不同,我清楚地知道你所有的困难。
其他人都一看你就设想一个办不到的未来,我一看你就不能想象一个不同的未来。

别人一看你,就联想到一个没有结果的未来,而我一眼就看到了你与众不同的未来。
其他人一看你就看到一个负担,我一看你就看到我的幸福。

别人一看你,就认为你是一个负担,唯有我看到你就看到了自己的幸福。
亲爱的儿子,不要灰心,长得像其他人一样并不是一件绝妙的的事。

亲爱的儿子,不要灰心,像其他人一样也并不是什么绝妙的事情。
即使别人都避开你,妈妈永远都会在你的身边。
就算所有的人都避开你,但妈妈会永远伴随你。

所有的都很对很好,我做的修改只是读上去更符合中文的使用习惯,希望没有背离你的意思。
Other people all look at you and think you're just another regular 13 year old boy, they can't see the secrets in your heart.
I look at you and I know you are not the same as all the others, I know all your difficulties.
Other people look at you and see an impossible future, I look at you and can't imagine another.
Other people look at you and see a burden, I look at you and see my happiness,
My dear son, don't be discouraged, being like everyone else really isn't all that great.
Even if everyone else turns their back on you, mama will always be with you.

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亲爱的儿子,不要灰心 (还有英语版)

My two cents. I think that changing the meaning slightly might make it flow better. :)

其他人都一看你就以为你仅仅是另一个正常的十三岁的男生,他们看不到你在心里的秘密。

别人一看你还以为你只不过是一个正常的十三岁的男生 - 他们压根儿看不见你藏在心底的秘密。
我一看你就知道你与别人不一样, 我知道你所有的困难。

可是我第一眼看着你就知道你与众不同 - 我对于你生活中一切的困难了如指掌。
其他人都一看你就设想一个办不到的未来,我一看你就不能想象一个不同的未来。

别人看你的时候只能看见一个不可能的未来,但是我看着你的时候却难以想象一个与此不同的未来。
其他人一看你就看到一个负担,我一看你就看到我的幸福。

在别人的眼中,你只不过是一个负担,但是在我的眼中,你就是我生命中的幸福。
亲爱的儿子,不要灰心,长得像其他人一样并不是一件绝妙的的事。

亲爱的儿子,不要灰心,与众人一丘之貉不见得是一件好事。
即使别人都避开你,妈妈永远都会在你的身边。

即使你被世界上所有人遗弃,妈妈永远待在你身边。

Other people all look at you and think you're just another regular 13 year old boy, they can't see the secrets in your heart.
I look at you and I know you are not the same as all the others, I know all your difficulties.
Other people look at you and see an impossible future, I look at you and can't imagine another.
Other people look at you and see a burden, I look at you and see my happiness,
My dear son, don't be discouraged, being like everyone else really isn't all that great.
Even if everyone else turns their back on you, mama will always be with you.

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