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Hello. Good afternoon everyone! Today is weekend! morning,I turn on the telvision. but I can't see it. Then I receive the phone.about a half hour. In the Last,I go to breakfast. afternoon,I mean to play game ,watching movie,and learning english. My Write is right?

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Hello.

Good afternoon everyone!
Today is the beginning of the weekend! 

In the morning,_I turn on the telvision. but there was no picture. I can't see it. [你的寫法是說你瞎了]
Then I receive the a phone call.about a half an hour later.
In the end [or "Finally"]  Last,_I went go to have [a] breakfast.
By the afternoon,I mean to played a game, ,watched a movie,and learnt some English.
Is my writing correct  is right?  or "Did I write correctly?"

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Hello.

Good afternoon everyone!
Today it is the weekend!

In the morning, I turned on the telvision but I couldn't watch it.

Then I received a the phone call for about a half an hour.
In the Last (Try this instead:) After all that,I go went to breakfast (if you actually WENT somewhere - if not and you stayed at home for breakfast: I had breakfast).
In the afternoon,I mean (Do you intend to do so? Or did you already do so? Pay attention to tenses: past and present!) to play game ,watching movie,and learning english. (Try: I want to play a game, watch a movie, and learn english OR if you have already done so: I played a game, watched a movie and learnt english)


My Write is right?

 

Good job! Keep practicing :)

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