I'd like to introduce myself.

Hi. I‘m My English name’s Char,
I'm from Guangzhou, China. Now I work and live in Guangzhou, and I'm a financial advisor.
I'm very interested in English, and I hope to make a America American friends interested to in Chinese, and so we can learn from each other in ITALKI.

I'd like to introduce myself.

Hi,I‘m english name’s Char,
I'm <from> Guangzhou china, <and> now I work and live in Guangzhou.   I'm a financial advisor .
I'm very interested in English.   I hope to make a American friends interested to in Chinese and <so> we can learn from each other in ITALKI.

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I'd like to introduce myself.

Hi,I'm my english name’s Char,
I'm from Guangzhou china, now I work and live in Guangzhou, I'm a financial advisor .
I'm very interested in English, I hope to make a American friends interested to in Chinese and we can learn from each other in ITALKI.

I'd like to introduce myself.

Hi.__I‘m My English name is Char. [你知不知道这字的意思? 烧掉/煳. 最好用, "Charles" or "Charlie"] 
I'm in Guangzhou china, now where I work and live and work there. in Guangzhou, I'm a financial advisor. .

I'm very interested in English. I Hope to make a American friends who are also interested to in Chinese and we can learn from each other through italki. in ITALKI.