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a family member with whom you have shared happy and sad memories
In my family, I love all members: parent, sister and younger brother. My sister is older than me 5 years. It is not problem to be my best friend who I can share happy and sad memories with, not just my sister.
Firstly, She and I have the same hobbies. She looked after me so heartily when I was a baby, so we know each other thoroughly. We love animal, such as: dogs and bunny. we have 2 dogs at home. We also like beautiful dolls like barbies, mickey mouse... and the same some sports: bicycling, swimming.
Second,She helps me resolve some problems about my homework and my relationship with my friend. When I have a problen of homework, she would explain it clearly. At school, when my classmate and I have some argument, she makes an appointment for me and my friend after knowing. She is very smart so I can share everything with her and the most important is that she never reveals any secret between us.
To sum up, I am very happy to have a best friend in my life. It is not easy to find a friend who can understand each other, I am not lonely.
When I have troubles in my life, I will get some advices and encourage from my sister.
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I love all members of my family: my parents, sister and younger brother. My sister is older than me by 5 years but our age difference is not problem. She is not only my sister but also my best friend with whom I can share both happy memories and sad ones.
She and I have the same hobbies. She has looked after me so much since I was a baby, so we understand each other a lot. We both love animals, especially dogs and bunny rabbits; we have 2 dogs at home. We also like beautiful dolls like barbies, mickey mouse, and we like the same some sports: bicycle riding and swimming.
My sister helps me with my homework or with my relationship with my friend. When I have a difficult homework assignment, she explains it clearly so I can understand it. At school, my classmate and I sometimes have disagreements and wind up not talking to each other. When my sister finds out, she sets up an opportunity for my friend and I to get together and make up. She is very smart, so I can share everything with her and most importantly she never reveals any secrets between us to anybody else.
To sum it up, I am very happy when I have a best friend in my life. It is not easy to find a friend with whom we can understand each other, and I am not alone. I have some advice and encouragement from my sister when I have troubles in my life.
a family member with whom you have shared happy and sad memories
I love all members of my family: my parents, sister and younger brother. My sister is older than me by 5 years. It is not problem. She is not only my sister but also my best friend with whom I can share happy and sad memories.
Firstly, she and I have the same hobbies. She looked after me so much when I was a baby, so we understand each other a lot. We love animals, especially dogs and bunnys, so we have 2 dogs at home. We also like beautiful dolls like barbies, mickey mouse, and we like the same some sports: bicycle riding and swimmming.
Second, she helps me solve some problems with my homework or with my relationship with my friend. When I have a difficult homework she explains it clearly about this. At school, my classmate and I have some arguments, when she knows she makes an appointment for me and my friend. She is very smart, so I can share everything with her and most importantly she never reveals any secrets between us to anybody.
To sum it up, I am very happy when I have a best friend in my life. It is not easy to find a friend with whom we can understand each other, and I am not alone. I have some advice and encouragement from my sister when I have troubles in my life.
Great journal entry! Good work!
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