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Please comment on and help me correct my pharagraph. I am writting about culture Religion occupies a very small portion of population of Hatinh province, it is about 19%, mainly Christianity and Buddhism. Christianity is the majority, the rest are Buddhism. That is the reason why there are very few temples and churches across the province. There is no big ritual of Buddhism and Christianity here. People here mostly do not follow any religion, but they worship their ancestor and the father of nation, that is great President Ho Chi Minh. Contrasty to Hatinh, nearly 100% of the Hue province's population follow religion. Religion in Hue is variety, there are Buddhism, Christianity, Hinduism and many others.Buddhism occupies the majority of population. There are many big rituals celebrated every year, such as Vesak, Mother Bodhisattva, full moon in July... In this time, people decorate houses, streets, specially Pagodas and temples. Even though they decorate cars, trucks with a lot of flowers, lights, statues, pictures and slogans. They drive these cars cross all streets inside and outside city. The rituals last two or three days. Morever, at that time, most people wear uniform called "ao lam". Every family eat vegetarian. You can find no meat in the market at this time. Especially, they make a big vegetarian party in Pagoda. Vegetarian dishes are diverse with different flavors and shapes. Many dishes look like chicken, beef steak, beef humberger, pork... but they are all made from vegetables, nuts, mushrooms and fungis

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Please comment on and help me correct my paragraph. I am writing about culture

 

Most people in Hatinh do not follow any organized religion, but they do practice ancestor worship and revere the father of our nation, the great President Ho Chi Minh.

 

Only a very small portion of the population of Hatinh province (about 19%) practices any kind of organized religion, with Christians being the largest group and Buddhism being the next largest group.

The relatively small number of adherents explains why there are very few temples and churches in the province. There are no major religious observances or festivals here, neither among Christians nor among Buddhists in this province.


In contrast to Hatinh, nearly 100% of the population of Hue province practices some organized religion. There are a variety of religions in Hue, including Buddhism, Christianity, Hinduism and many others with the majority of the population practicing Buddhism . There are many big festivals celebrated every year, such as Vesak, Mother Bodhisattva, full moon in July... In this time, people decorate houses, streets, specially Pagodas and temples. They even decorate cars, trucks with a lot of flowers, lights, statues, pictures and slogans. They drive these cars throughout city. The rituals last two or three days. At that time, most people wear a costume called "ao lam". Families eat only vegetarian meals.  No meat is sold in the market at this time. Especially, they make a big vegetarian party in Pagoda. Vegetarian dishes are diverse with different flavors and shapes. Many dishes look like chicken, beef steak, beef hamburger, pork... but they are all made from vegetables, nuts, mushrooms and fungus.

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