Today is my 25th birthday. This year is different becouse I'm not having a big celebrate party. I'm only going out to dinner with my family. They gave me a Kitchen Aid bread maker and an ice cream maker. I love this machine. My parents bought the bread maker and my brother bought the ice cream machine. Now I can make bread every day. I love to make bread and cakes.

On Sunday, I will make cherry ice cream. I think it's delicious. ["it's" = it is / "its" = possessive]

Right now, I am going to go to bed. to sleep I'm very tired, and tomorrow I get up at half past six (6:30) to work. I love to sleep a lot. I can sleep all the day.
This weekend we have a lot of work. I like this because the money is good, but I hate this because I get tired.
I am going to sleep now. Good night!

Good job - and happy birthday! :-)

     Today is my twenty-fifth birthday. This year it is different because I did not have a big party. I just went out for dinner with my family. They gave me a "Kitchen Aid" and an ice cream maker. I love this machine. My parents bought the "Kitchen Aid," and my brother bought the ice cream machine. Now I can make bread every day. I love making (to make) breads and cakes. 

     I will make cherry ice cream on Sunday. I think it's delicious. I'm going to bed to sleep now. I'm very tired, and tomorrow I will get up at at half-past six for work. I love to sleep a lot. I can sleep all day.
This weekend we have a lot of work. I like this because the money is good, but I hate this because I will be tired. I am going to sleep. Good night!

¡Feliz cumpleaños, Alicia!