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童女之舞, My Favorite Fiction (1) 童女之舞 is my favorite short story and it has won the first prize of literature held by 聯合報, the most popular newspaper in Taiwan, in 1991. It is narrated by the first person, 曹麗娟 in the story, about the friendship, maybe lesbianism, between her and her best friend, 鍾沅, for almost fifteen years long. The writing style of the author is so beautiful that I was attracted by it when I read for the first time. At irregular intervals, I reread it to remind myself of the innocent feeling I find in the words. I have try to write down my own experience, what I consider to be as beautiful as the story between the girls, but I fail. I do not know why I am just not good at writing something in which my feeling is revealed. I will print some lines of 童女之舞 here and try to translate them into English in order to share the original with you on one hand, and hope to get corrections on the other hand.

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童女之舞, My Favorite Fiction (1)

童女之舞 is my favorite short story, it won the first prize of literature, awarded by 聯合報, the most popular newspaper in Taiwan, in 1991.
It is narrated in the first person by 曹麗娟. It's the story of the friendship, maybe lesbian relationship of 曹麗娟 and 鍾沅, over almost fifteen years.
The writing style of the author is so beautiful that I was attracted by it when I read for the first time.
At irregular intervals, I reread it to remind myself of the innocent feeling I find in the words.
I have tried to write down my own experience, what I think is as beautiful as the story between the girls, but I have failed.
I don't know why I am just not good at writing about my felings.
I will type some lines of 童女之舞 here and try to translate them into English in order to share the original with you on one hand, and hope to get corrections on the other hand.

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曹麗娟 is the author of 童女之舞. If you are interested in it, you may try to find the edition on line.
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sorry, in the third line, 曹麗娟 should be 童素心.

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