昨天吃了好吃的

昨天工作了，下班后我去了人民广场地铁站，然后去福州路买了颜料后再去静安寺跟女友见面跟女友。我们去吃了韩国菜：很好吃。面汤、跟牛肉和奶酪，很好吃。我们讨论了一些关于韩国人的话题。你知道在前苏联特别重是亚洲有很多朝鲜少数民族吗？他们分布在已经东北和朝鲜附近。他们的祖辈逃脱了日本和第二次世界大战后被苏联方他们安置在中亚洲。现在他们还依然在那人。

Yesterday I worked, after work I went to People's Square metro and then to Fuzhou lu to buy paints and after that to Jing'an Temple to meet my girlfriend. We ate Korean food, it was delicious. Noodles in souo with beef and cheese. We talked a little about Korea. Do you know that in the former Soviet Union, especially in Central Asia there are a lot of Koreans? Before they were near Korea and Manchuria. Their ancestors fled the Japanese and after WW2 the Soviets moved them to Central Asia. They're still there.

昨天吃了好吃的

昨天工作了，下班后我去人民广场地铁站然后去福州路买了颜料后去静安寺见面跟女友。我们去吃韩国菜很好吃。面汤跟牛肉和奶酪。我们讨论了一些韩国人。你知道在前苏联特别重亚洲有很多朝鲜少数民族吗？他们已经东北和朝鲜附近。他们的祖辈逃脱了日本和第二次世界大战后苏联方他们在中亚洲。他们还那人。

Yesterday I worked, after work I went to People's Square metro and then to Fuzhou lu to buy paints and after that to Jing'an Temple to meet my girlfriend. We ate Korean food, it was delicious. Noodles in souo with beef and cheese. We talked a little about Korea. Do you know that in the former Soviet Union, especially in Central Asia there are a lot of Koreans? Before they were near Korea and Manchuria. Their ancestors fled the Japanese and after WW2 the Soviets moved them to Central Asia. They're still there.

昨天吃了好吃的

昨天我有上班，下班後我去人民廣場地鐵站，然後去福州路買了顏料，之後去靜安寺跟女友見面。

我們去吃了韓國料理，很好吃，有湯麵，牛肉和奶酪，我們討論了關於韓國的事。

你知道，在前蘇聯，特別是在中亞也有很多韓國人？在它們附近的朝鮮和滿洲。他們的祖先逃離了日本人和二戰之後，蘇聯它們移到中亞。他們還在那裡。

昨天吃了好吃的

昨天工作了，下班后我去人民广场地铁站然后去福州路买了颜料后去静安寺见面跟女友见面。我们去吃韩国菜,很好吃。(我们吃了)面汤跟牛肉和奶酪。我们讨论了一些韩国人。你知道在前苏联,特别重亚洲(特别是or尤其是中亚地区)有很多朝鲜少数民族吗？他们已经东北和朝鲜附近在他们还住在满洲里和朝鲜附近之前(i translate your english sentence into this)。他们的祖辈逃脱了日本和第二次世界大战后苏联方放(fàng)他们在中亚洲。(i think 苏联将他们安置在中亚 may be more appropriate)他们还那人(现在)仍然or还 在那儿。

Yesterday I worked, after work I went to People's Square metro and then to Fuzhou lu to buy paints and after that to Jing'an Temple to meet my girlfriend. We ate Korean food, it was delicious. Noodles in souo with beef and cheese. We talked a little about Korea. Do you know that in the former Soviet Union, especially in Central Asia there are a lot of Koreans? Before they were near Korea and Manchuria. Their ancestors fled the Japanese and after WW2 the Soviets moved them to Central Asia. They're still there.

P.S.:"见 somebody"="跟/和 somebody 见面"

昨天吃了好吃的

昨天工作下班后我去人民广场地铁站，然后去福州路买了颜料去静安寺跟女友见面。我们去吃的韩国菜，面汤跟牛肉和奶酪，很好吃。我们讨论了一些韩国人。你知道在前苏联特别是亚洲有很多朝鲜的少数民族吗？他们在东北和朝鲜附近。他们的祖辈逃脱了日本和第二次世界大战后从苏联去到中亚，现在他们还在那。

Yesterday I worked, after work I went to People's Square metro and then to Fuzhou lu to buy paints and after that to Jing'an Temple to meet my girlfriend. We ate Korean food, it was delicious. Noodles in souo with beef and cheese. We talked a little about Korea. Do you know that in the former Soviet Union, especially in Central Asia there are a lot of Koreans? Before they were near Korea and Manchuria. Their ancestors fled the Japanese and after WW2 the Soviets moved them to Central Asia. They're still there.