Happy Holidays 3

I think I [非大写不可] am a lazy person lady. . I gave myself so many excuses to avoid writing articles in English.__But However, now I will continue to write my an article about my happy holidays which have passed for about is about one month old now.__I have Many regretsed for/at my laziness.

I like love food very too much. .That This is why losing weight is too very hard for me. [or "[This is why] To lose weight is..."] Whenever I arrives to to some place, ,I always find some delicious look for good food there and while my husband like to find goes to some local bar bear there 。 When One day, while we were walking alone on the streets in the old city of Shanghaiguan in SHANHAIGUAN. I suddenly felt detected a good smell wonderful aroma from a small restaurant which has an interesting name, _ Four Dumplings or 四条包子。 Now, 条 is a /message word/classifier in Chinese.  but It always after a for longish or slender things. ,but 包子 However, dumplings are not.is a kind of delicious food .It confused me for a long time. .But now In the end, I knew the reason. Do you know why? You Can you guess?

I My nose followed the smell wafting aroma and went in. . I saw a lot of many people standing there on in line to buy dumplings 包子。[or "I saw many queuing to...] It Took me about 30 minutes to half hour to get them.  buy .When i got them ,I felt really happy when those darlings were in my hand! You can see a big smile on my face.

Happy holidays 3

I think I am a lazy lady. I gave myself so many excuse's to avoid writing articles in English. But now I will continue to write my article about my happy holidays which were about one month ago. I regreted my laziness.
I like food very much. That is why to lose weight is too hard for me. When I arrives at some place, I always find some delicious food there and my husband like's to find some local bear there. When we were walking along the streets in the old city in SHANHAIGUAN. I suddenly felt a good smell from a small restaurant which has a interesting name_ 四条包子。 条 is a message Word in Chinese，but it  is always after a long thing ,but 包子is a kind of delicious food. It confused me for a long time. But now i know the reason. Do you know why? You can guess.
I followed the smell and went in. I saw a lot of people standing there in line to buy 包子。It took me about 30 minutes to buy them. When i got them, I felt really happy! You can see a big smile on my face.

Excellent work, I noticed you sometime's put a space before punctuation mark's. Remember spaces come after the punctuation mark. Really well done, excellent work :)