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johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010 Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo zai xue Zhongwen liang nian. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo sheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian yisheng. Ta shi 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi. Ta shi 86 sui le. Ta you xinzangbing le. Wo de zui de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qushi qunian. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo kan yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo qi ma jiao lian. Ta de laopo you jinse de tou fa, ye feichang lan yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nuer, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Fayin de Albany shi "A- la - ban - yi" bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao shuo zhongwen de liuli. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu. Wo xi huan pijiu. Wo xi huan weishiji jiu. "drambuie" shi wo de zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ban de Sugelanren, yi ban de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui jie shengci de zhongwen?

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johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo zai xue le liangnian de Zhongwen. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo sheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta xianzai yijing 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le. Ta 86 sui le. Ta you xinzangbing. Wo zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qunian ye qushi le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo kan de dong yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. Wo de laopo you jinse de tou fa, he feichang lan de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nver, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Albany de fayin shi "A- la - ban - yi" bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao shuo liuli de zhongwen. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu. Wo xi huan pijiu. Wo xi huan weishiji jiu. "drambuie" shi wo zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ban de Sugelanren, yi ban de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui zhongwen? (What does your "jie shengci" mean? )

So cool! I corrected a whole pinyin notebook entry.^^
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johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo zai xue Zhongwen liang nian le. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo sheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta yijing 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le. Ta qushi shi 86 sui le. Ta you xinzangbing le. Wo zuihao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qunian qushi le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo neng kan yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. Wo de laopo you jinse de tou fa, he feichang lan de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nver, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Fayin de Albany shi "A- la - ban - yi" bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao liuli de shuo zhongwen. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu. Wo xi huan pijiu. Wo xi huan weishiji jiu. "drambuie" shi wo de zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ban de Sugelanren, yi ban de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. (Wei shenme wo bu hui jie shengci de zhongwen? what does ur mean?)
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johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo yijing xue Zhongwen liang nian le. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo chusheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le. Ta 86 sui le. Ta you xinzangbing . Wo zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qunian qushi le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo neng kan yidian pinyin. Wo xiang qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. wo de laopo you jinse de tou fa, ye you yishuang shenlanse de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nuer, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Albany de Fayin shi "A- la - ban - yi" ,bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang  shuo liuli de zhongwen . Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu,pijiu he weishiji. "drambuie" shi wo zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ge putong de Sugelanren, yeshi yige putong de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui jie shengci de zhongwen?
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johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo zai xue xi Zhongwen liang nian le. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo chu sheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta shi  yi jing 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le ,xiang nian Ta shi 86 sui le. Ta you xinzangbing le. Wo de zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qu nian ye qushi qunian le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo kan dong yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. Ta de laopo ta you jinse de tou fa, ye feichang he lan se de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nuver, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Fayin de Albany de fa yin shi "A- la - ban - yi" bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao liuli de shuo zhongwen de liuli. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu,Wo xi huan pijiu. Wo xi huan he weishiji jiu. "drambuie" shi wo de zui xi huan de jiu ai. Wo shi yi ban de yi ge pu tong de  Sugelanren, yi ban pu tong de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui jie shengci de zhongwen?(I don't know what this sentence means)
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johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo zai yijing xue le liangnian de Zhongwen . Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo chu sheng yu Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi wei yisheng. Ta jinnian 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian yin xinzangbin qushi le. Ta shi   xiangnian 86 sui . Ta you xinzangbing le. Wo de zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, danshi ta qunian qushi le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo kan zhi dong yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo  qizi bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo qizi shi qi ma jiao lian. Ta de laopo you yitou jinse de toufa, ye feichang yishuang  lanse de yanjing. Wo you liangge haizi, yi ge nuer, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Fayin de Albany  pinxie shi "A- la - ban - yi" , er bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao shuo yikou liuli de zhongwen de liuli. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu ,. Wo xi huan pijiu. Wo xi huan  he weishiji jiu.  "drambuie" shi wo de zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ban  putong de Sugelanren, yi ban de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo guoji . Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui lijie zhongwen zhong de shengci de zhongwen?

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