An opinion essay
Nowadays, the using of computers and the internet is more common. This technology helps to improving your searching skills and your knowledge about differents topics. I guess, however, that most people spend too much time playing videogames and checking their social networks.
In relation to the above, most people do not know how to search information on the Internet. They read articles, but never finish to read them, because they are distracted by an advertisement and end on another website and so on.
Secondly, the rest prefer download courses on their computers to learn how to do things to reduce the contamintation and save animals. Unfortunately, the aproppiated use of Internet and computers is exercised by a small part of the population.
In short, I agree with give more importance to learn things that help the society and the planet and less importance for the videogames or not interesting websites.
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An Opinion Essay
Nowadays, the use of computers and the internet is becoming more common. This technology helps to improve your researching skills and your knowledge of different topics. I guess, however, that most people spend too much time playing videogames and checking their social networks.
In relation to the above, most people do not know how to search for information on the Internet. They read articles, but never finish reading them, because they are distracted by an advertisement and end up on another website and so on.
Secondly, the rest prefer to download courses on their computers to learn how to do things to reduce contamintation and save animals, (are you criticizing these people for learning about important topics in a "lazy" way, or are you contrasting them positively to those who play videogames and waste time on Facebook, etc.?). Unfortunately, appropriate Internet use is only exercised by a small part of the population.
In short, I agree with giving more importance to learning things that help the society and the planet and less importance to videogames and uninteresting websites.
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An opinion essay
Nowadays, the use of computers and the internet is more common. This technology helps to (improving) improve your searching skills and your knowledge about differents topics. I guess, however, that most people spend too much time playing videogames and checking their social networks.
In relation to the above, most people do not know how to search for information on the Internet. They read articles, but never finish( to) reading them, because they are distracted by an advertisement and end up on another website and so on.
Secondly, the rest prefer to download courses on their computers to learn how to do things to reduce
(the) contamintation and save animals. Unfortunately, the aproppiated use of Internet and computers is exercised by a small part of the population.
In short, I agree with giving more importance to learning things that help the society and the planet and less importance (for) to (the) videogames or (not) uninteresting websites.
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