Dizziness!
Thoughts fly over my head and they just bring more confusion with them,
Yesterday on a bus I saw an old woman who I am still thinking of her,
In the first sight you could understand how familiar she was with living a life,
She wasn’t like me at all!
Then I met a friend, she was feeling alone!
I walked with her , I talked with her,
I bought a bag, brown one!
She bought shoes, dark red!
And she was still feeling alone!
It was like she wasn’t there, she was in a painful thoughts of her past!
And I was confused, totally confused, with my thoughts about her feelings now!
How much hard is to read one’s feelings and how harder is to response properly to them!
Then I felt dizzy!
The weather was nice yesterday but when I think about it, I feel like it was dismal!
Someone inside me asks me if it was the weather dismal or my life is?
I evade answering!
And again thoughts attack to my mind land!
“Poor the mind land”, my heart thought!
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Dizziness!
Thoughts fly over my head and they just bring more confusion with them,
Yesterday on a bus I saw an old woman who I am still thinking of her,
In the first sight you could understand how familiar she was with living a life,
She wasn’t like me at all!
Then I met a friend, she was feeling alone!
I walked with her, I talked with her,
I bought a bag, a brown one!
She bought shoes, dark red!
And she was still feeling alone!
It was like she wasn’t there, she was lost in a painful thoughts of her past!
And I was confused, totally confused, with my thoughts about her feelings now!
How much hard is to read one’s feelings and how much harder is to respond properly to them!
Then I felt dizzy!
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The weather was nice yesterday but when I think about it, I feel like it was dismal!
Someone inside me asks me, if it was the weather dismal or my life is?
I evade answering!
And again thoughts attack the landscape of my mind!
“Pity the landscape of my mind”, my heart thought!
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thank you verrrrrrrrrry much dear Sara for you kind words and wishes!
i hope you will never ,ever again taste the bitterness of lonelyness!
may all your moments be happy honey! :**** :))
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Awesome as always! Feeling alone sucks! I had this feeling before and I know how horrible it is. Hope no one living in the world feels sadness, depressed, loneliness, and hopeless. These feelings are the most terrible and painful ones that one could have. I hope all people always smile and be happy.
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