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To get wise not twinkles Getting Wise is not Wrinkling
It's easy to get old ,but hard to be get [雖然沒有錯, 用重複字句可以强調你的論證]wise. By the As time passes, I only get more twinkles on my face, but doesn't get the [太多强調也不好, 文章就失去温柔感] no wisdom in my eyes. A pity! What a sad thing!
If you asking my birthday wish, I wish I can be a wiser woman As for my birthday wish, you may ask, would be to become wiser and that all that everything happened in my life will all turn out to be good thing in the end.
To be a someone who is happier one, be a smarter one, be a definitely better one.
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To get wise not twinkles wrinkles
It's easy to get old ,but hard to be wise. By the time passing, I only get more twinkles wrinkles in my face, but doesn't get the wisdom in my eyes. What a sad thing!
If you asking my birthday wish, I wish I can be a wiser woman and everything happened in my life will all turn to be good thing.
Be a happy one, be a smart one, be a better one.
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