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My first Notebook Hello. I'm Azu. I'm living in Tokyo, and I'm working at an office as an office worker, sometimes working as an illustrator. Actually I want to study conservation and restoration of books at a college in the UK in future, so, for now I'm studying English and bookbinding at home. Study of bookbinding is very interesting for me, but English writing is quite difficult because I'm not sure that my writing is good or bad when I study it by myself. Please help my writing!

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My first Notebook

 

Hello. I'm Azu.

I'm living in Tokyo, and I'm working at an office as an office worker.  Sometimes I working as an illustrator.

Actually I want to study conservation and restoration of books, at in a UK college in the UK in future. so, for now Until then, I'm studying English and bookbinding at home.

The study of bookbinding is very interesting for me, but is difficult for me to write in English writing is quite difficult because as I'm not sure that how my writing is good or bad fares since when I am studying it by myself.

Please help with my writing!

 

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Hi Azu. What a great hobby and future study. I love books too. Both because I love reading them, and also because I love them as objects (nice ones, of course).

 

Good luck with your studies! (And don't worry - your writing seems perfectly good.) Here are a couple of corrections - explanations at the bottom.

 

My first Notebook

Hello. I'm Azu.

I'm living in Tokyo, and I'm working at an office as an office worker,
sometimes working as an illustrator.

Actually I want to study conservation and restoration of books at a college in the UK in the future,
so, for now I'm studying English and bookbinding at home.

The Study of bookbinding is very interesting for me, but English writing is quite difficult
because I'm not sure that my writing is good or bad when I study it by myself.

Please help my writing!

 

You can say either "The study of bookbinding is..." OR "Studying bookbinding is..." Both have the same meaning.

This "for me" isn't really neccessary - it's clear from the rest that you mean you.

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