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happy birthday today I have birthday today. i ate many food and get the many gifts. Gifts is mouse, t-shirt and necktie. I want it because I will have interview I found my job and I want settle in a company. so~~~ i'm happy my birthday.

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happy birthday today

I have birthday today. i ate many food and get the many gifts. Gifts is mouse, t-shirt and necktie. I want it because I will have interview I found my job and I want settle in a company. so~~~ i'm happy my birthday.

 

Today is my birthday!

 

Today is my birthday. I ate lots of food and recieve many gifts. The gifts that I received was a mouse, t-shirt, and necktie. I was so happy to recieve a necktie as a gift due to I have a interview in Settle, WA with a company that I want to work for. I'm so excited about my birthday. 

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happy My birthday today

Today I have celebrated my birthday today. i ate many a lot of food and get got the many gifts. Gifts is I got a mouse, t-shirt and necktie. I want it (??) because I will have an interview I found my job and hopefully, I want will settle in a company. so~~~ i'm happy my birthday was awesome.

 

안녕!~ Good try! 

 

Just one place - I want it - what did you mean by it? Does it = t-shirt and necktie? Because you will have an interview? 

 

If so, you can phrase it as:

 

I really enjoyed these gifts because it happened that I will have an interview, and hopefully I'll land myself a job offer and settle in a company. 

 

Good luck!

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