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My first writing in italki Hello! This is my first writing on this virtual platform and I'll try it writing about my self. My name is Julia, I'm from Spain and I get B1 certificate a month ago. Now I want to study harder for B2 level. I'm studing mathematics at the university. I love it, but the mayority of specifics maths books are writen in english, so I need no improve my english level. Also, I think that it's the most important lenguage in my country to get a job. About my hobbies, I like taking photographs, crafting, walking and teaching. I teach maths lessons to high school student and I want to be a maths teacher in the future. Well, have to go. Sorry for all my mistakes, and thanks for checking!

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My first writing in italki

Hello! This is my first writing on this virtual platform and I'll try it writing about my self to write about myself.

My name is Julia,. I'm from Spain and I get got B1 certificate a month ago. Now I want to study harder for B2 level.
I'm studing mathematics at the university. I love it, but the mayority majority of specifics specific maths books are writen written in english English, so I need no to improve my english English level. Also, I think that it's the most important lenguage language in my country to get a job.

About my hobbies,. I like taking photographs, crafting, walking and teaching. I teach maths lessons to high school student students and I want to be a maths teacher in the future.

Well, have to go. Sorry for all my mistakes, and thanks for checking!

 

In English language any noun starts with a capital letter. So wherever you use "English" as a noun, you have to capitalise the first letter.

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Good writting the further maths teacher. For your writting i see English is so mportant in Spain also it's important to look for a good job in China. Go aheade.
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My first writing on italki

Hello! This is my first writing on this virtual platform and I'll try it writing about myself.

My name is Julia, I'm from Spain and I get B1 certificate a month ago. Now I want to study harder for B2 level.
I'm studing mathematics at the university. I love it, but the majority of specifics maths books are written in English, so I need to improve my English level. Also, I think that it's the most important language in my country to get a job.

About my hobbies, I like taking photographs, crafting, walking and teaching. I teach maths lessons to high school students and I want to be a maths teacher in the future.

Well, have to go. Sorry for all my mistakes, and thanks for checking!

 

Very good, Julia! The only mistakes were typos, like "mayority" instead of "majority". Also, we don't say "the university" unless we are talking about a specific school. We usually just say "university". Congratulations on getting your B1 certificate. You are on a good path to get to B2.

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