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People should sometime so things that they do not enjoy doing People should sometime so things that they do not enjoy doing Human is a social being that has many roles in social or individual and It is trying do them as well as possible. This roles and activities maybe are not enjoyable some time but do well them, have shown their qualification. In my view these activities are necessary to become mature. Life is counter of verity occasions that are had different responsibility. Such as been father, been mother, been child, been student and etc. Each person has a dream in life that reach it needs to stick some activities. In this way could be have a comfortable lifestyle and save enjoy for next days. Similarly, students need to spend a lot of time studying. In spite of being tempted to go out with friends and attend to parties, keep their priorities to get high grades. In conclusion, through life are many challenges that we can get experience to become strong, wiser and more responsible to achieve a really enjoy.

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People Somethimes we must do should sometime so things that we don't like. they do not enjoy doing 


Human beings are is a social creatures being that has bearing many roles in either socially or individually and It is trying do them as well as in the best manner possible. Sometimes the This roles and activities maybe are not be enjoyable some time but do well them, we must.  have shown their qualification???. In my view these activities are necessary to become mature. Life is counter of verity occasions that are had different responsibility. Such as been father, been mother, been child, been student and etc. I don't understand what you are really saying, so I am only guessing.  To be able to the things we don't like is to show our maturity.  Whether if we are a father, a mother, a child or a student, we have our own rocks to carry.

Each person one of us has a dream in life and charting through the course is not easy.  We may have to do things, make sacrifices not to our liking.  that reach it needs to stick some activities. In the end when our goals are met, happy days are here again. this way could be have a comfortable lifestyle and save enjoy for next days. Similarly, Students need to spend a lot of time studying diligently. Yes, there will be bombardment of temptations In spite of being tempted to go out party with friends. Fathers, to work hard for the family, the mother, if not working, has to attend carefully to the needs of the family.  Yes, each and everyone has a job to do and and attend to parties, keep their priorities straight. to get high grades. You needed all these extra because you mentioned them in the previous paragraph, otherwise your essay is flighty without solid anchoring.

In conclusion, through life, There will be  are many challenges ahead.  By dealing with them, that we can get will grow strong with experience and each future challenge will becomes easier and life becomes better. to become strong, wiser and more responsible to achieve a really enjoy.

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People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing

People should sometime so things that they do not enjoy doing

Humans are is a social beings that has who have many roles in social society or as individualsly and It is They attempt to do them to the best of their ability. trying do them as well as possible. This These roles and activities maybe are perhaps not always enjoyable but we do them anyway. some time but do well them, have shown their qualification. In my view these activities are necessary to become mature. In life we encounter a variety of situations that require different responsibilities, is counter of verity occasions that are had different responsibility. such as being been a father, been a mother, been a child, and a been student. and etc.

Each person has a dream in life and to attain it we have to do certain things. that reach it needs to stick some activities. In this way could be have a we can have a comfortable lifestyle and save to enjoy our future. enjoy for next days. Similarly, students need to spend a lot of time studying. In spite of being tempted to go out with friends and attend to parties,  they have to remember keep their priorities to get high grades.

In conclusion, throughout our lives there life are many challenges that we have to face can get experience in order to become stronger, wiser and more responsible and be able to to achieve a really enjoy our lives.

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 This one is based on Chang Ching Wen's

People should sometime so things that they do not enjoy doing

People should sometime so things that they do not enjoy doing

Human is a social being that has many roles in social or individual ,and it It is trying do  to play them as well as possible. Maybe This roles and activities are not enjoyable some time  sometimes (but do well them) ( the expression is not good ), have shown their qualification. In my view these activities are necessary to become mature. Life is counter of verity occasions that are had with different responsibility. Such as been father, been mother, been child, been student and etc.

Each person has a dream in life ,which needs us to stick to  and work hard to reach .( I don't know whether this sentence is correct or not, haha)that reach it needs to stick some activities. In this way could be have a comfortable lifestyle and save enjoy for next days. Similarly, students need to spend a lot of time studying. In spite of being tempted to go out with friends and attend to parties, keep their priorities to get high grades.

In conclusion, through life are many challenges that we can get experience to become strong, wiser and more responsible to achieve a really enjoy.

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People should sometime do so things something that they do not enjoy doing

People should sometime so things that they do not enjoy doing

 


Human is a social being that. who has plays many roles in social society orindividual and It is trying do them as well as possible(???) . This these roles and activities maybe are not enjoyable some time but do well on them, have shown their qualification. (???) In my view ,these activities are necessary to become mature. Life is counter of verity occasions that are had different responsibility. Such as been being a father, been being a mother, been being a child, been being a student and etc.

Each person has a dream in life that reach it needs need to stick accomplish some activities. In this way, we could be can have a comfortable lifestyle and save enjoy enjoyment for next days  the future.Similarly, students need to spend a lot of time on studying in spite stead of being tempted to go out with friends and attend to parties, keep their priorities to get high grades.

In conclusion, that we can get experience to become stronger, wiser and more responsible to achieve a really enjo realenjoyment through life are many challenges .

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