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A Eternal Jerney of A Gene. Could you correct my entry? Thank you in advance for your kindness. My gene will be inherited to my daughters and my descendants. A half my daughters' s gene was made from my gene and a quarter gene of my descendants will be made from mine. Like that, my gene will be inherited to my descendants forever. Besides, I inherited half of gene from both my father and my mother. My gene is in my many ancestor's blood when I go back. The bottom line is an individual lives between an eternal past and an eternal future. My life time is a part of a gene that is making a journey forever. My body will be lost but my spirit will continue to live in the gene and travel forever.

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An Eternal Journey of a Gene.

Could you correct my entry? Thank you in advance for your kindness.


My gene will be inherited passed on to my daughters and my descendants. [If you want to use inherit, then write, "My daugthers and my descendants will inherit my genes] A Half my daughters' s genes was made come from me.  My grandchildren will have a quarter of mine. my gene and a quarter gene of my descendants will be made from mine. Like that, my gene will be inherited to my descendants forever With each successive generation, my genes will be passed on forever.
Besides, I inherited half of gene from both my father and my mother. My gene is in my many ancestor's blood when I go back. I too has half the genes from my parents.  Thus I have the genes of some remote ancestor.


The bottom line is an individual lives between an eternal past and an eternal future. My life time is just a part of a gene that is making a journey forever. My body will be lost but my spirit will continue to live in that gene and travel goes on forever.

 

Nice thoughts but according to logic, with each successive generation, the original genes will be halved.  As one approaches infinity, the limit goes to zero.  However, genes are indivisible.  So in time no division is possible.  In real biological terms, genes are either copied and passed on or be rejected as we evolve. For example, most far easterners do not have the enzyme to process alcohol and so we have the Asian flush when we drink.

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A The Eternal Jerney Journey of A Gene My Genes.

Could you correct my entry? Thank you in advance for your kindness.
My genes will be inherited to by my daughters and my descendants. A Half of my daughters' s genes was made from my gene came from me and a quarter gene of my descendants' genes will be made come from mine me, as well. Like that, my genes will be inherited to by my descendants forever.
Besides Likewise, I inherited half of my genes from both my father and my mother. My genes is in my many ancestor's blood when I go back. came from my ancestors, many generations back.
The bottom line That fact is, an individual lives between an eternal past and an eternal future.
My lifetime is a part of a set of genes that is making a journey forever. My body will be lost but my spirit will continue to live in these genes and travel forever.

 

 

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