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初書簡 今日は結婚記念日です。夫とわたしわきゅとしけっこんしていません。

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初書簡 Did you want to say " the first contribution " ? If so... you can say " 初投稿" 

 

 

 

 

【今日は結婚記念日です。】-----> Perfect! ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

 

【夫とわたしわきゅとしけっこんしていません。】

 

※ I わたしは / You あなたは…etc  You use " は " in this case.

 

※ 〜ません is nagative form.

    

    It is raining.  あめがふっています。

    It is not raining.  あめがふっていません。

 

    My husband and I have been married for nine years. 結婚してから9年です。

  My husband and I have not been married for nine years 9年結婚していません。:P

 

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Goog work!! 

Congratulations on your wedding anniversary☆ Yay! 

 

 

  

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初書簡

今日は結婚記念日です。夫とわたしわきゅとしけっこんしていません。

 

初所感

今日は(私たちの)結婚記念日です。夫と私が結婚して9年になります。

If you want to express ' a letter' in Japanese, '書簡’ is correct.

But if we want to talk about our impression, we use '所感’.  

’所感' seems a little bit formal. You can also use '感想' here.

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Thank you for the suggestion. "Today is my wedding anniversary. My husband and I have been married for nine years." ありがとうございます。
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If you write English version of your notebook with your Japanese, we can catch what you wanna say precisely. Then, we can correct your Japanese more easily! ^_^

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