The Surprise

One year ago, I was living in Canada because an important firm wanted me to work for them. so I couldn't refuse that chance this opportunity.

My life there was good, but actually I was feeling lonely most of the time. Despite of this, I met some funny colorful people and I went out with them.

When I talking with my family or my Spanish friends, I never told them what how I was feeling because I didn't want to them to get  were worried. So I tried to /pat on a happy face for them/put up a false front/ seem really happy.

One day, I have met tried calling to my Spanish friends to talk by on Sskype, but they weren't no one was online. in At that moment, I felt I had become the most lonely loneliest person in the world.  so I decided to lie in fell onto my bed and cried my heart out until I was too tired to continue on.  crying, but The suddenly, the doorbell rang and I was a bit missed because puzzled since I wasn't waiting expecting anyone. for nobody, but When I opened the door, my face change jaw dropped!  completely, There they were! there, In my Canadian abode house, they were my Spanish friends!

This isn't just fiction, a real history, it's only to practice my writing. Thanks for the help!

Nonetheless, a very heartwarming story.

The surprise

One year ago I was living in Canada because an important firm wanted me to work for them, so I couldn't refuse that chance opportuity.
My life there was good, but actually I was feeling lonely most of the time. In spite of /despite of this I met some funny people and I went out with them.
When I was talking with my family or my Spanish friends I never told them what I was feeling because I didn't want to they them to be were worried, so I tried to seem really happy.
One day, I have met to with my Spanish friends to talk by(via sounds better) skype, but they weren't online. In that moment I felt like the most lonely lonelinest person in the world so I decided to lie in my bed and cry until I was too tired to continue crying, but suddenly, the doorbell rang! I was a bit missed late getting to the door because I wasn't waiting expecting anyone for nobody, but when I opened the door, the look on my face changed completely,there they were there, in my canadian house home! They were my Spanish friends!

This isn't a real history, it's only to practice my writing, thanks for the help!

Great job! A lot of the corrections were so that it wuld sound more natural. And although people say "nobody", it's poor English :)