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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a software engineer,our company mainly do the DMS system, the automotive industry. I like playing basketball, listening to music. I just want someone that i can get along with and have fun with,and we can learn from each other

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I appreciate your helping me.
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I'm a software engineer for a company that produces the DMS system which is part of the automotive industry.
I like playing basketball and listening to music.
I just want someone with whom I can get along with and have fun,and we can learn from each other
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a software engineer for a our company that produces the DMS system which is part of the automotive industry.
I like playing basketball and listening to music.
I just want someone with whom I can get along with and have fun,and we can learn from each other
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a software engineer for a our company that produces(works with?) the DMS system which is part of the automotive industry.
I like playing basketball and listening to music.
I just want someone with whom I can get along with and have fun.  
> I can't fit "learn from eachother" into this context. Usually it's like "We learned a lot from eachother" < ...kind of sentence.  
Someone I can learn from.  Someone who can learn from me.

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Because you're nearly fluent my correction will aim on "more natural" and very small errors. Your later essays seem to be from someone else (are they yours?) - they sound like literature - that not even a native English speaking person could write easily. I'm curious...

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