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I'll translate your English since no one else did.
王老师要辞职啦
(To the people who are correcting this: If you see anything that looks unnatural, even if there is technically no mistake, can you please change it to how a Chinese person would write it? All of the Chinese I have learned comes form speaking, so I think my writing isn’t as formal as it should be, and I’m trying to get better at it. Thanks!)
修改者: 如果見到小作中的文字語句, 虽然語法无錯, 但写得不順, 請幫助更改一下, 与中文母語者写得無異. 我所学的中文是從交談中学回來的, 因此寫作不够正規. 我認為越有多习越有多進步.
还有一个问题,上面这段怎么翻译啊?
我要不要辞职?我纠结了很久这个问题,前几周终于想通了 我要辞职了。虽然我工作的条件很好,我的同事也很好,但是现在我就是不喜欢我的工作。如果我辞职的话我需要放弃很多很有价值的东西,例如一个很大的免费的房子,稳定的工资,带薪休假, 等,所以我面对放弃工作的这个问题的时候我其实很害怕。没有这个工作合同就意味着我没有地方住,没有工资和没有签证。这些东西都很重要但是我三思之后还是觉得辞职是对的。我觉得有太多人在做他们不爱的工作,而且我也是其中之一。生活太短了,我们没时间去做不喜欢做的事情。如果我有一个朋友在跟我同样的情况下我一定会建议他辞职,所以我也应该言行一致。
我现在没结婚,没有孩子,没有需要换的贷款,所以我可以做一个实验,看我能不能实现我的理想的生活。如果我失败的话也没关系,损失不会太大。一般的人有很多责任所以他们不能随便辞职而我除了填饱我的肚子没什么责任。我想抓紧这次机会,因为过几年以后我可能再也不会有这样的机会。
给自己这么多自由其实有点危险,特别容易浪费时间。虽然自由和时间有潜力是非常有用的,也有潜力完全没有用. (I know that sentence is horribly wrong, so here is what I was trying to say: Although freedom and free time the potential to be very useful, they also have the potential to be a complete waste, 自由与闲暇虽是好, 但如水一样, 可載舟亦可覆之, 白费一塲)
如果我的自控能力不够强的话很容易把很懒的生活方式养成一个习惯,而且如果没有别人管我的话我可能会把这一年的时间全部都浪费。所以我辞职之前一定要有一些具体的目标。我下周要写这个话题。
我感觉我今天写的东西写的有点差,请大家谅解。
王老师要辞职啦
(To the people who are correcting this: If you see anything that looks unnatural, even if there is technically no mistake, can you please change it to how a Chinese person would write it? All of the Chinese I have learned comes form speaking, so I think my writing isn’t as formal as it should be, and I’m trying to get better at it. Thanks!致正在修改这篇小作文的你:如果你看见任何不自然的表达,即使没有语病,你能够帮我以一个中国人自然通俗的表达来修改它吗?我通过说话来学习所有的中文,所以我觉得我的写作并没有很规范,但我正努力使我的写作技能变得更好。谢谢。)
还有一个问题,上面这段怎么翻译啊?
我要不要辞职?我对这个问题纠结了很久,前几周终于想通了,我要辞职。虽然我工作的条件很好,我的同事也很好,但是现在我就是不喜欢我的工作。如果我辞职的话我需要放弃很多很有价值的东西,例如一个很大的免费的房子,稳定的工资,带薪休假等,所以当我面对要不要放弃工作这个问题的时候其实很害怕。没有这个工作合同就意味着我没有地方住,没有工资和签证。这些东西都很重要,但是我三思之后还是觉得辞职是对的。我觉得有太多人在做着他们不爱的工作,而且我也是其中之一。生活太短了,我们没时间去做不喜欢做的事情。如果我有一个朋友在跟我同样的情况下我一定会建议他辞职,所以我也应该言行一致(一般是用来表示自己做的要和自己说的一样,这些话可以是承诺或目标或决心什么的。但是这里是你是在假设的情况下对他人说的话,所以我觉得有点不恰当。不过这只是我个人的看法和用语习惯,你可以多问下其他人。)。
我现在没结婚,没有孩子,没有需要换的贷款,所以我可以做一个实验,看我能不能实现我理想的生活。如果我失败的话也没关系,损失不会太大。一般的人有很多责任所以他们不能随便辞职,而我除了填饱我的肚子没什么责任。我想抓紧这次机会,因为过几年以后我可能再也不会有这样的机会。
给自己这么多自由其实有点危险,特别容易浪费时间。虽然自由和时间有可能是非常有用的,但也有可能完全没有用. (I know that sentence is horribly wrong, so here is what I was trying to say: Although freedom and free time have the potential to be very useful, they also have the potential to be a complete waste) 如果我的自控能力不够强的话很容易把懒散的生活方式养成一个习惯,而且如果没有别人管我的话我可能会把这一年的时间全部都浪费。所以我辞职之前一定要有一些具体的目标。我下周要写这个话题。
我感觉我今天写的东西写的有点差,请大家谅解。
我想说,你很棒!真的很少有人有这种勇气和机会,尤其是在现在这种社会环境下。这样的勇气和机会并存的时刻在我们的一生中是很少的,你真是个幸运的人。所以,加油吧!努力朝着前方前进吧!谢谢你的这篇小作文给了我正能量。
What I wanna say is you are awesome!Honestly,there are few people have the courage and chance,especially under today's social environment.The moment that courage coexists with chance is valuable in our life.You are sunch a lucky man.So,go!Move on to the way right achead.And thank you for your airticle that gave me positive feeling.
Plus:how to say "正能量"?
Can you please change it to how a foreign person would write it?Thank you.
All of the Chinese I have learned comes form speaking, so I think my writing isn’t as formal as it should be, and I’m trying to get better at it.
我的中文程度來自日常生活的聽與說,自認寫作能力未臻成熟,因此企圖加以鍜鍊.
Although freedom and free time the potential to be very useful, they also have the potential to be a complete waste.
意譯:自由可能成就無限,亦可能一無是處.
Can I use "achieving something infinite" and "end in nothing" to make a sentence in which there is the same meaning as that of yours? Can youhelp me?
"I read Hermann Hesse's works, in Chinese, of course, in high school, which was part of the reason why I gave up studying textbooks ever since, maybe," my sentence in a message to a Taiwanese friend on Italki, was corrected by him.
We argued about which is correct.
I gave up studying textbooks ever since I read Hesse's works.
I had given up studying textbooks ever since I read Hesse's.
I gave up studying textbooks ever since I had read Hesse's.
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