太早起床了

我现在在上海虹桥火车站，等去杭州。我坐着跟女友和她的妈妈。我以前去了苏州还没去杭州。女友的妈妈今天地一次外上海。我希望看西湖。 昨天个朋友告诉我有高的大厦在西湖景色在那里很漂亮。

I'm at Shanghai HongQiao Railway Station, waiting to go to Hangzhou. I'm sitting with my girlfriend and her mother. I've been to Suzhou before but not Hangzhou. This will be my gf's mother's first time outside Shanghai. I'm looking forward to seeing West Lake. Yesterday one of my friends told me about a tall tower at XiHu from which the view is very good.

一大早起床

我现在在上海虹桥火车站，等著去杭州的火車，我和我女朋友和他的媽媽。

我已前去過蘇州，還沒有去過杭州，女朋友的媽媽也是第一次來上海。

我希望能看到西湖，昨天有個朋友告訴我在西湖有個大廈，那裡的景色很美。

太早起床了-in oral Chinese , u also can say ---大早起床

我现在在上海虹桥火车站，等待去杭州的（火）车。---等待去...的车 can be more briefly ex:候车

我跟女友和她的妈妈坐着。---坐着+someplace is better

我以前去过苏州但还没去过杭州。女友的妈妈今天也是第一次来上海。我们想去（计划去）看西湖。 昨天有个（also一个）朋友告诉我西湖那里有幢很高的大厦，景色很漂亮。 

I'm at Shanghai HongQiao Railway Station, waiting to go to Hangzhou. I'm sitting with my girlfriend and her mother. I've been to Suzhou before but not Hangzhou. This will be my gf's mother's first time outside Shanghai. I'm looking forward to seeing West Lake. Yesterday one of my friends told me about a tall tower at XiHu from which the view is very good.

very good , please pay more attention to vocabulary & sentence can be completed ex, 去过，等待...

太早起床了

我现在在上海虹桥火车站，等待去杭州的火车。我坐着跟女友和她的妈妈一起坐着。我以前去过了苏州还但没去过杭州。女友的妈妈今天地第一次外来上海。我们希望计划去看西湖。 昨天一个朋友告诉我西湖那边有个很高的大厦在西湖景色在那里很漂亮。

I'm at Shanghai HongQiao Railway Station, waiting to go to Hangzhou. I'm sitting with my girlfriend and her mother. I've been to Suzhou before but not Hangzhou. This will be my gf's mother's first time outside Shanghai. I'm looking forward to seeing West Lake. Yesterday one of my friends told me about a tall tower at XiHu from which the view is very good.