Stories Of Girls On Campus (Part 3)

(All the real names of places and people have been altered in the story)

Blair grew up in a traditional intellectual family where her parents had not allowed her to act like a loser, such as doing poorly on school tests. They would call in counselors and tutors to make sure their only child get got good grades, high scores, and a warm welcome to the decent prestigious college of her choice.(decent just means average, not bad, but it seems you were looking for a more positive word)

Blair was nothing if not so goodwell-bred and intellectual. She had small and single-eyelid eyes, a round face with straight hair pulled back into a ponytail. She hated to admit that she was slightly fat, although it was the truth.  She did have a try to shed some weight when she was at high school, but it wound up failing. (or you can say "attempt to shed some weight") She just couldn't restrain her desire to consume some sweet munchies, even for two days.

When the military training was over, Blair decided to pick up a dress at Manson's. She had been familiar with that place, since she had gone there for several times before. Every time she stepped into there she would feel like she were felt like she was in heaven. There were so many beautiful dresses hanging on racks. She got salivated to just looking at them. She wanted to try them all on, but of course she couldn't. When you were chubby, you definitely had a lot of limits.
(To be continued)