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Happiest Time Doubtlessly, teenage years are the purest time in people’s life, when children are growing not only on mental but also on physical aspects. In my opinion, teenage years are the basis of people’s whole lives, which can bring a better future to them, if they make efforts during that time. Some people prefer to grow up as soon as possible, especially the youth, who think that adult life brings more happiness. Firstly, people might be financial independent, once they finish their study and obtain satisfying jobs, so that they can allocate their disposable income by themselves. To some extent, they need not either to ask their parents to buy something that they really desire or to be decided by their parents what they should wear or eat. Secondly, more freedom would they acquire, for instance, the adult need not to ask others whether or not they could drink or smoke. Whereas, after children grow up, they have to face more responsibilities, especially when they have a family as well. What I mean by this is that they need to earn enough money to bring up their babies and to take care for their parents at the same time. Further more, their jobs take a lot of time, as a result, they have less time to enjoy leisure activities after teenage years. On the other hand, many people always miss their childhood after they grow up, although their material requirements have been satisfied. As I mentioned, young people need not to worry about their family’s financial problems, which are their parents’ duties. In addition, their family will company them after they go back home from schools and have prepared a big meal for them. While nowadays’ teenagers have so heavy burden, which comes from their parents’ expectations and a large amount of homework, that they even can not do sports or make friends on the weekend. All in all, I still convince that teenage years are the most precious and happiest period in people’s whole lives, when the youth have their family’s protection and company.

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Happiest Time

Doubtlessly, teenage years are the purest time in peoples' lives, when children are growing up not only on mentally, but also on physically. In my opinion, teenage years are form the basis of peoples' whole lives, which can bring a better future to them, if they make an efforts during that time.

Some people prefer to grow up as soon as possible, especially the youth, who think that adult life brings more happiness. Firstly, people might be financially independent, once they finish their study studies and obtain satisfying jobs, so that they can choose themselves how to allocate their disposable income. To some extent, they do not need to ask their parents when they buy something that they really desire or to be decided by their parents what they should wear or eat. Secondly, they have more freedom would they acquire, for instance, when an adult, one does not need not to ask others whether or not they can drink or smoke. Whereas, after children grow up, they have to face more responsibilities, especially when they have a family as well. What I mean by this is that they need to earn enough money to bring up their babies and to take care for their parents at the same time. Furthermore, their jobs take a lot of time, and as a result, they have less time to enjoy leisure activities after their teenage years.

On the other hand, many people always miss their childhood after they have grow up, although their material requirements have been satisfied. As I mentioned, young people need not to worry about their family’s financial problems, which are their parents’ duties. In addition, their family will accompany them after they go back home from schools and have prepared a big meal for them. While nowadays, teenagers have so such a heavy burden, which comes from their parents’ expectations and a large amount of homework, that they cannot even do sports or make friends on the weekend.

All in all, I am still convinced that teenage years are the most precious and the happiest period in peoples' whole lives, when the youth have their family’s protection and company.

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