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Life is a spiritual journey
It's been a month and it's painful. But it's still the past.
Time is some magical. Sometimes,it brings sad things into our life. But, at the same time, it can heal and makes things work out the same time (in English, we have an expression "time is a healer", which you could use instead e.g., "But, at the same time, time is a healer"). Then we realize about something and we move on with memories. That is the way how we live.
I almost lost my feelings and passions for everything. I felt exhausted. I knew this these bad feelings would be gone go and what I needed was just time. But I didn't know how long it would last. Luckily, the holiday finally came comes.
There is No need to plan anything. I can Just do whatever I want and try to feel inside myself (I am not sure what "try to feel inside myself" means?). And I am much better now. :-)
Things do not always go as smoothly as what we want. We suffer, then we heal. We may be heart- broken, we may be dissatisfied about with our jobs, we may be disappointed about someone we care about, we may have financial issues, we may be sick of our lives. But it all of this doesn't matter. Because it's not the end.
I do believe I will have a happy life and I am actually happy. It's just sometimes I need to be good enough and strong enough to have a more beautiful life. So I have to experience things (A better way of saying this - "what I need is experience").
I will move on, but with good memories. I will have a positive attitude towards life, with a smile on my face everyday. I will experience things, with and make the right choices. I will be thankful for my life, and lead a good life with proper behavior. I will Just to be myself and that will lead me show me the way to lead a happy life.
Very poetic! And very well written. The corrections I have made are mostly minor.
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