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First notebook entry: Introducing myself (The picture is the face when I was a little kid) I have been learning English because it opens me many doors of opportunity.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

(The picture is of me the face when I was a little kid)
I have been learning English because it opens me many doors of opportunity for

Thanks for helping me write in correct English. Any aid would be greatly appreciated.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

(The picture is the face when I was a little kid)

I have been learning English because it opens me many doors of opportunity.

Hello. I am a 20 year old guy from South Korea, living in Seoul. I am a college student, majoring in Business Administration. I am here to practice my English conversation, becasue although I got a TOEFL score 106 out of 120, it is not as comfortable for me to speak in English as to speak in Korean, my mother tongue.

I have lived in California, US for 3 months, which was a good memory since I hang out with my American friends well.  Anybody is more than welcome to contact me, so please send me a message.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

(The picture is of me the face when I was a little kid)

I have been learning English because it opens me many doors of opportunity for me.

빨간색    Red        = 대문자로써주세요.    Capitalization
     파란색     Blue        = 정정 & 철자                Correction & Spelling
        녹색     Green    = 더자연스러운방법   More natural - Common
     보라색     Purple    = 코멘트 / 제안              Comment - Suggestion
         밑줄     Underline = 구두점과 띄어쓰기   Punctuation - Spacing

Hi, my name is Asia, I'd like to teach you English if you want. I'm also learning Korean :)
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귀여운 아이었어요. You were a cute kid. 아이만큼 귀엽였어요. As a kid you were cute.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

(The is a picture of me when I was a little kid)

I have been learning English because it opens me many doors of opportunity for me.

좋았어요.   . :) Well done.

빨간색    Red        = 대문자로써주세요.    Capitalization
     파란색     Blue        = 정정 & 철자                Correction & Spelling
        녹색     Green    = 더자연스러운방법   More natural - Common
     보라색     Purple    = 코멘트 / 제안              Comment - Suggestion
         밑줄     Underline = 구두점과 띄어쓰기   Punctuation - Spacing
                              © Color Correction Key by Nancy4366

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