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Article in the text Hello everyone! Could you check, if I write correct articles in this text? Although THE British are more health-conscious than they used to be, many of them still like to eat A bacon for breakfast once or twice A week. But most are unaware that there is A unusual custom surrounding bacon. THE custom is known to date back hundreds of years to THE 13th century or even earlier. According to tradition, A married couple could win a large piece of bacon if they could prove to a judge that they had not regretted their marriage or had AN argument for at least A year and A day. In one town, Dunmow, A couple had to kneel on sharp stones and say THE special poem which ended with the lines: 'For this is our custom at Dunmow well known, Though the pleasure be ours, the bacon's your own.' After THE poem, there was a noisy parade around town. Dunmow claims to be the only town in THE Britain which still continues THE tradition to this day. Thank you so much! Best wishes, Mikołaj

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Article in the text

Hello everyone!
Could you check, if I write correct articles in this text?

Although THE British are more health-conscious than they used to be, many of them still like to eat A bacon for breakfast once or twice A week. But most are unaware that there is An unusual custom surrounding bacon. THE custom is known to date back hundreds of years to THE 13th century or even earlier. According to tradition, A married couple could win a large piece of bacon if they could prove to a judge that they had not regretted their marriage or had AN argument for at least A year and A day. In one town, Dunmow, A couple had to kneel on sharp stones and say THE (see the note below) special poem which ended with the lines: 'For this is our custom at Dunmow well known, Though the pleasure be ours, the bacon's your own.' After THE poem, there was a noisy parade around town. Dunmow claims to be the only town in Great Britain (you can also say "the British Isles" but you wouldn't say "The Britain") which still continues THE tradition to this day.

Thank you so much!
Best wishes,
Mikołaj


note: In this case you could either say "the" or "a" depending on the emphasis. In my opinion, if most people that are going to read this will know what poem you are referring to then you would say "the" as you did in this case. If the person has most likely never heard the poem I would probably say "a" instead because it's still obvious that you're referring to a specific poem, but you're in essence acknowledging that they probably haven't heard it before.


Also note: I only paid attention to the words capitalized and didn't correct any of the other mistakes made (most of it was close to right though)

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Article in the text

Hello everyone!
Could you check, if I write correct articles in this text?

Although the British are more health-conscious than they used to be, many of them still like to eat a bacon sandwich for breakfast once or twice a week. But most are unaware that there is an unusual custom surrounding bacon. THE custom is known to date back hundreds of years to the 13th century or even earlier. According to tradition, A married couple could win a large piece of bacon if they could prove to a judge that they had not regretted their marriage or had an argument for at least a year and a day. In one town, Dunmow, a couple had to kneel on sharp stones and say the special poem which ended with the lines: 'For this is our custom at Dunmow well known, Though the pleasure be ours, the bacon's your own.' After the poem, there was a noisy parade around town. Dunmow claims to be the only town in the Britain which still continues the tradition to this day.

Thank you so much!
Best wishes,
Mikołaj

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Mikolaj, Bacon does not take an article here. If it read 'piece of bacon', then it would get an article. Before a vowel, 'a' must be changed to 'an'. I think it should be 'a' special poem. Britain does not need an article ever. There is a posting here today on the board explaining the difference between counting and non-counting nouns. Take a look at it it does a good job of explaining why bacon doesn't get an article in its first use here. http://www.italki.com/entry/430517 Good luck.

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