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A Portrait By Window Light A few days ago, I saw a nice female portrait which was taken by a professional photographer. I like the view of an illuminated face against a dark background, so I took a similar portrait. My daughter sat down opposite a window. I drew the curtains so that the narrow beam of light illuminate her profile. Thus the main source of light created the transition from light to shadow. I used a black reflector as the dark background. I set the exposure compensation of -1 EV to make the picture darker.

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A Portrait By Window Light

 

A few days ago, I saw a nice female portrait picture [a portrait is a painting done by hand] of a girl/woman/lady which was taken done by a professional photographer.
I like the view of an illuminated face against a dark background. So I decided to take took a similar portrait one using my daughter as the subject.


My daughter She sat down facing opposite a window. I drew the curtains so that in until there is a the narrow beam of light to illuminate her profile. Thus the this main source of light created the transition from light to shadow. I used a black reflector to act as the dark background. I set the exposure compensation of -1 EV to make the picture darker.

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A Portrait By Window Light

A few days ago, I saw a nice female portrait which was taken by a professional photographer.
I like the view of an illuminated face against a dark background, so I took a similar portrait.
My daughter sat down opposite a window. I drew the curtains so that a narrow beam of light could illuminate her profile. Thus the main source of light created the transition from light to shadow. I used a black reflector as the dark background. I set the exposure compensation of -1 EV to make the picture darker.

Brilliant, the photo is cool too. 

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A Portrait By Window Light

A few days ago, I saw a nice female portrait which was taken by a professional photographer.
I liked the view of an illuminated face against a dark background, so I took a similar portrait.
My daughter sat down opposite a window. I drew the curtains so that the narrow beam of light illuminated her profile meaning that the main source of light created the transition from light to shadow. I used a black reflector as the dark background. I set the exposure compensation of -1 EV to make the picture darker.

 

Notes

"so I took a similar portrait" this is correct, but you might want expand this a bit e.g.  "so I was inspired to take a similar portrait."  Artists always like to claim inspiration.

"Thus" is correct, but the word is archaic. If you use it you'll sound pretentious.

 

I love the photo.  Really striking effect.

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Спасибо, Нил!
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Вы совсем правильно употребили слово "portrait". Без сомнения можно употреблять это слово в контексте фотографии.

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