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From "magicians of Caprona". The Benvenuto cat's description
He wasn't what we would can call a lovely cat. His head was strangely big and flat, covered by rough grayish stains, memory of countless battles. [memory ricordo = memory, ok, but also "souvenir" - which I think is the idea hereof countless battles.] And (other memory of the same battles) the ears were bend BENT forward on the front [wouldn't 'sulla fronte' here mean 'on its' forehead'?] like ragged brown hood: a hundred bites made it indented like a holly. {this is just an image that doesn't work well in English, I think, but I don't have an alternative. It would take an experienced and creative translator - we'll see what iTalkians come up with!}
Italiano: Non era quel che si dice un bel gatto.
La sua testa era stranamente grossa e schiacciata e coperta da ruvide chiazze grigiastre, ricordo d'innumerevoli battaglie. E(altro ricordo delle stesse battaglie) le orecchie gli si ripiegavano in avanti sulla fronte come uno sbrindellato cappuccio dentellato marrone: un centinaio di morsi le avevano rese dentellate come agrifoglio.
From "magicians of Caprona". The Benvenuto cat's description
He wasn't what we you would can call a lovely cat. His head was strangely big and flat, covered by with rough greyish stains patches, memory a reminder of countless battles. And (other memory reminder of the same battles) the his ears were bend bent forwards on the front his forehead like a ragged brown hood: a hundred bites made it indented had left them as serrated as a holly leaves.
Italiano: Non era quel che si dice un bel gatto.
La sua testa era stranamente grossa e schiacciata e coperta da ruvide chiazze grigiastre, ricordo d'innumerevoli battaglie. E(altro ricordo delle stesse battaglie) le orecchie gli si ripiegavano in avanti sulla fronte come uno sbrindellato cappuccio dentellato marrone: un centinaio di morsi le avevano rese dentellate come agrifoglio.
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