Veranda (fixed)
I have one little veranda in my house. I smoke on there every morning, just at the moment When the sun comes up.
I sit on a chair having an indistinct consciousness; I pick up one of my cigarettes and quietly bite it on my mouth.
Through the window, I see several trees wavering in the winds, though it is all I can see except the dense flats.
I gazed them for a little and asked one of them "How can you be so lively?" but it only assumed ignorance.
So, I just tipped off the ashes of my jealousy into the ashtray and got up and went out from there.
I guess, It repeats every morning. I will probably go on to the veranda next day, sit in the same spot. And envy the trees again.
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Veranda (fixed)
I have one little veranda in my house. I smoke on there it every morning, just exactly at the moment W when the sun comes up rises .
I sit on a chair having in a status of indistinct consciousness; I pick up one of my cigarettes and quietly bite it on my mouth. put it between my lips.
Through the window, I can see several trees wavering in the winds, though it is all I can see except for the dense flats.
I gazed at them for a little and asked one of them "How can you be so lively alive?" but it assumed seemed clueless .
So, I just tipped off the ashes of my jealousy into the ashtray and got up and went out from of there.
I guess, It repeats every morning. Tomorrow I will probably go on out to the veranda next day, sit in the same spot. And envy the trees again.
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