About to me!

Hi, this is mi firsth my first note in Italki!!!
I am Colombian... I am 20 years old year! I study Anthropology, this is a career beautiful (or maybe interesting/fascinating/enjoyable) subject and that I really love!
Now I am reading books and more books (or "more and more books") for to do help me with my monograph (dissertation, thesis?) It is abaout of cyberanthropology.
I am living in Popayan, which It is well-known as whem "La Ciudad Blanca" (White City) or "La Jerusalem de America" (Jerusalem's America's Jerusalem). This city is famous for its Semana Santa (what is this?) and it is a city is very traditional and colonial, it is nice!!! :)
Hahaha well, now will return to me! Hahaha ;)
I really like ice cream, my favorites Icecream flavours are the Macadamia, chocolate, pistachio and natas (I don't know what this is), hahaha ok, all!! hahaha.
I really like pop music, Lady Gaga is my favorite single singer!... I really love to Lady Gaga <3 she is an inspiration!! :3
I don't like sport.. I dont practice (or "play") any sport... but I need to do it!... the truth is I winner gained weight in the vacationes.. hhahahaa ok, I am fat! :P jajaja ;) tomorrow I will begin the to diet! ;) I promet! promise hahaha
in The end!... there This is a little about of me... I will soon writing write more notes! It is some funny...!!

Good day!.. :)

From my heart, Carlos Eduardo!!

This is very informal/casual which is ok. Check your punctuation and capitals.

About to me!

Hi, this is mi firsth note in Italki!!!
I am Colombian... I am 20 old year! I study Anthropology, this is a career beautiful and that I really Love!
now I reading books and more books for do my monograph, It is abaout of cyberanthropology.
I living in Popayan, It is well-known whem "La ciudad Blanca" (White city) or "La Jerusalem de America" (Jerusalem's America)... this city is famous for its Semana Santa... it is a city very traditional and colonial, it is nice!!! :)
hahaha well, now will retur to me! hahaha ;)
I really like Ice cream, my favorites Icecream are the Macadamia, chocolate, pistacho, natas, hahaha ok, all!! hahaha
I really like pop music, Lady Gaga is my favorite single!... I really Love to Gaga <3 she is inspiration!! :3
I dont like sport.. I dont practic any sport... but I need do it!... the truth I winner weight in vacationes.. hhahahaa ok, I am fat! :P jajaja ;) tomorro begin the diet! ;) I promet! hahaha
in end!... there a little about of me... soon writing more note! it is some funy...!!

Good day!.. :)

from my heart, Carlos Eduardo!!

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