My primary school
I studyed Chinese, Maths,Art,Music,Writing and PE. Like most of kids, PE was my favourtie subject at that time. I still remember my PE teacher now. He was a patient person. He liked to encourage kids to do sports outside.
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My primary school
I studyed Chinese, Maths,Art,Music,Writing and PE. Like most of kids, PE was my favourtie subject at that time. I still remember my PE teacher now. He was a patient person. He liked to encourage kids to do sports outside.
Please also remember to leave a space after the use of a comma.
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My primary school
I studyed studied Chinese, Maths,Art,Music,Writing and PE. Like most of kids, PE was my favourtie subject at that time. I still remember my PE teacher now. He was a patient person1*. He liked to encourage kids to do sports outside2*.
1* you could say "He was patient".
2* 'Outside' is fine but I would mabye have said 'outdoors'
Reads nicely with a good use of natural vocabulary.
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