男孩发现了女孩
最近我的十一岁的儿子被治好了沉迷于玩电脑游戏的行为。治疗是女孩！哈 哈哈！
Recently my eleven year old son was cured of his obsession with playing computer games. The cure, girls! Hahaha!
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寫得很好，另一種寫法建議如下：
最近我的十一歲的兒子被治好了沉迷於玩電腦遊戲的行為。治療是女孩！哈 哈哈！
(最近我十一歲的兒子他對電腦遊戲的沉迷被治癒了。治癒他的，是因為女孩！哈哈哈！)
※ 雖然第二句原文沒有提到誰被治癒或者是什麼原因被治癒的，但是在中文的說法上，仍然會需要補上主角是什麼。
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男孩发现了女孩
最近我十一岁的儿子被治好了沉迷于玩电脑游戏的坏习惯。治疗他的是一个女孩！哈 哈哈！
Recently my eleven year old son was cured of his obsession with playing computer games. The cure, girls! Hahaha!
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哈哈
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