A wonderful experience

My history started at my university. I was talking with my friends and one of them said to us, "why do not don't* we go to Murcia with other students of Mathematics?" In a first moment At first, I believed it was a bad idea, but then I thought after that I wanted to go with my friends to meet see others cities.

Two moths after later, We travelled from Sevilla to Murcia in by car. It was a long distance but we talked and the trip did seemed short. I don't like to drive a car and my car was slow, so my friend drove his car which was faster than my one mine. In Murcia, we met another other students and went out in the evenings. We sailed by a river, and we did played sports on the beach(or seaside - I would say "beach". If you use "seaside," you'll need to say "... at the seaside"). I loved that experience, and I would like to repeat it with my friends. The next year we will have a wonderful experience in Málaga, if we have enough money.

[[Please, if you correct me, can you mark me a note between 1(bad)-5(excellent)?? Thank you!]] 3 - You seem to have a strong handle on things like verbs and verb tenses, but watch out for words like then, after, other, etc. Keep practicing! :)

* The phrase is always "Why don't" (Why don't you cook with eggs?) or or "Why do *subject* not"

(Why do you not cook with eggs?). It's never "Why do not *subject*." I recommed memorizing the form "Why don't" :)

A wonderful experience     ( 3 :)  )

My story started at my university. I was talking with my friends and one of them said to us, "why don't we go to Murcia with other Mathematics students?" At first, I believed it was a bad idea, but I thought after that I wanted to go with my friends to meet others' cities.

Two months after, we travelled from Sevilla to Murcia by car. It was a long distance but we talked and it made the trip short. I don't like to drive and my car was slow, so my friend drove his car, which was faster than my one. In Murcia, we met other students and went out in the evenings. We sailed on a river, and we played sports on the beach (or seaside). I loved that experience, and I would like to repeat it with my friends. Next year we will have a wonderful experience in Málaga, if we have enough money.

[[Please, if you correct me, can you mark me a note between 1(bad)-5(excellent)?? Thank you!]]