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I finally belong to someone else (自己翻译,薛之谦的<我终于成了别人的女人>) Packing up all my stuff Where am I heading to Nothing else matter As long as I can be with you However, that is just a fantasy I can feel you outside the window Praying to god hoping that is you who take my hand till the end of the universe Making a commitment with someone else but not you I cant control myself when you showing up unexpected in my wedding day I finally belong to someone else A girl who used to put you first My gentleness was for you only in the old day Losing the faith that I had in you So I say yes to someone else But worring about I am still in love with you

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像jeff 所说的,意境表达不错,不好照原文有些不够准确。老鬼改得很好。下面是我的版本,肯定也有很多错误????

 

我终于成了别人的女人

词 薛之谦

曲 高阳

收拾好行李 我要去哪里 只要跟着你 可是梦一推就醒
All packed up, everywhere to go, as long as you're with me. But it's just a dream.
车外的风景 有你的声音 多希望是你 牵起我这身白衣裙
The scenery outside the car window and your voice.....I wish it were you who lifted up my this wedding dress.
可是我的婚礼 对面不是你
But it's not you who's in front of me at my wedding.
我控制不了我自己 如果你出现在这里
I couldn't control myself if you showed up here.
我终于成了别人的女人
I finally became another man's wife,
曾经为你奋不顾身的人
Once the one who would sacrifice herself for you.
只为你偶尔的温柔 越走越深
Deeper and deeper i go, only longing for some of your occasional tender love.
我终于成了别人的女人
I finally became another man's wife
等到最后无路可退的人
The one who waits until no way back
还担心留给你的爱
Still hung up on the love for you
还是那么(样)深
Still that deep
还是那么深
That deep

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I finally belong to someone else (自己翻译,薛之谦的<我终于成了别人的女人>)

Packing up all my stuff
Where am I heading to
Nothing else matters
As long as I can be with you
However, that is just a fantasy
I can feel you outside the window
Praying to god hoping that it is you who will take my hand till the end of the universe
Making a commitment with someone else but not you
I can't control myself when if you showing up unexpected in on my wedding day
I finally belong to someone else
A girl who used to put you first
My gentleness was for you only alone in the old days
Losing the faith that I had in you
So I say yes to someone else
But worrying about whether I am still in love with you

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Thank you~ I will try my best to improve my English.O(∩_∩)O!
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In spirit, not bad but as a translation, imprecise :(

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