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cinema Today I watched new Harry Potter. I love this story by J.Roaling. I grew up with Harry. And I really upset about the end of this story. Have you ever seen it? Do you like it? :)

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Today I watched the new Harry Potter (film/movie). I love this story by J.K. Rowling. I grew up with Harry, and I am really upset about the end of this story.
Have you ever seen it? Do you like it? :)
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Cinema (At the Movies)

Today I watched the new Harry Potter movie. I love this story by J.Roaling. I grew up with Harry and I became really upset with how the story ended.
Have you ever seen it? Do you like it?

Oh, don't tell me the  ending... I haven't seen it yet! 

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