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happiness Today, I learned about happiness. Its a pretty difficult question to me and there are some exciting questions like what i have to put the reasons for happiness in order. There are a lot of attractive reasons for happiness, but i choose 'Friends and Family' is number one. Because, as the word 'Peaple are social animal', peaple have to have relations constantly with surrounding enviroment to live. To peaple, what the most important surrounding environment is other peaple, except myself. In conclusion, peaple have to have relations with other peaple. If the surrounding environment like other peaple is made of love or stability, the peaple who live in the environment will be happy. Everyone doesnt give love to everyone and even they can hate each other, however family give us unconditional love and we can feel happy and exciting from friends. So, having good relationship with family and friends is the most important thing to be happy.

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Today, I learned about happiness. Its a pretty difficult question (in this sentence question doesn't fit. A better word would be topic.) to for me and there are some exciting questions like what i have having to put the reasons for happiness in order.
There are a lot of attractive reasons for happiness, but i choose 'Friends and Family' is as number one.
Because, as the word 'Peaple People are social animals', peaple people have to have relations constantly with the surrounding enviroment to live. To peaple people, what the most important surrounding environment (You are not using this term correctly, however I do not know a better word as I don't fully understand what you meant to say) is other peaple people, except myself.
In conclusion, peaple people have to have relations with other people peaple.
If the surrounding environment like other peaple is made of love or stability, the peaple people who live in the environment will be happy.
Everyone doesnt give love to everyone and even they can hate each other Not everyone gives love to others and they can even hate each other, however family gives us unconditional love and we can feel happy and exciting from with friends.
So, having a good relationship with family and friends is the most important thing in order to be happy.

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Vietnam has a idiom: "your family can support you at home, but my friends will support you when you are out of home" It means that not only your family give you their loves without any condition but also your good friends. In my opinion, Happiness is when you are sad, you have a family to come back or you have some friends can listen to you, cry with you,...
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thank you yours opinion. i think there are a lot of reasons for happiness. But i have to put them in oreder from 10 reason. The ten reasons is that. 'friends and family', 'money', 'being merried', 'helping others', 'your genes', 'being attractive', 'growing old', 'religion', 'intelligence' and 'not wanting more than you've got'. So i thought 'friends and family' is first one frme the ten reasons. But i think when everything is getting well, we can feel happy and importantly, we, ourselves think positively.
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I am happy to see that you appreciate family and friends as much as you do, but I don't necessarily agree with your first cause of happiness. I believe to find happiness people must first love themselves. Family and friends can grow apart, move away, or die and then all you have left is yourself. Therefore, the first order of happiness is loving and accepting who you are and what makes up your flaws.
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but i think if you already love all people behind you you have to know new people too . because variety is the taste of life :)

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