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My first notebook I don´t know what kind of issue are you interested in. I would like to write about something more interesting than vacations, but is my first entry and for the momento I´m not dare. I had been in Thailand. My vacations lasted 20 days. I visited the north, the centre and the south of this amazing country. It was a special experience, culture is more different than mine, I learnt more about Asian culture, their way of life... Nevertheless, the different áreas inside the own country have features that make them uniques. Buddishm, Islam, mountains, jungle, beaches, touristic áreas, markets.... I would like to tell you something I didn´t know before this travel, is about the elephants. When we were preparing the activities we saw many pics in internet that shows people enjoying riding elephants. It wasn´t an activity that we thought to do because we didn´t like specially, but as we wanted to visited the jungle, and all the trekkings included the activity, we thought that meybe we could do it. Was then, when we began to look into about elephants... and what was our surprised we discovered that elephants jaus carry on over their back just 100 kg, and the chair weight 50 kg... It was a big surprised. It is so sad, we read that elephants are in many cases abused. we dicided not to do it. During our stay in the north, in a a city named Chiang Mai, we tried to hire a trekking along the jungle that not included the riding over elephants... when we were about to decline to do this activity, fortunately, we found a trekking that not included this activity. We made a trekking for two days and it was amazing. In addition we found a recovery centre of elephants that had suffered abuses. We visited it and enjoyed feeding and washing them in an enviroment of the respect. Thank you very much for your time. Please excuse my awfull english, I promised that I attempt to improve it. See you!

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My First Notebook

 

I don't know what kind of subject you are interested in. I would like to write about something more interesting than vacations, but this is my first entry and for the moment I do not dare.

I have been in Thailand. My vacations lasted 20 days. I visited the north, the centre and the south of this amazing country.

It was a special experience, the culture is more different to mine. I learned much about Asian culture and their way of life. Nevertheless, the different áreas inside the own country have features that make them uniques unique. Some of these features that vary according to the region include religions such as Buddishm and Islam, as well as varying geography including mountains, jungle, beaches, touristic areas áreas, and markets.

I would like to tell you something I didn't know before this trip, is about something regarding the elephants. When we were researching the activities we saw many pictures on the internet that showed people enjoying riding elephants. It wasn't an activity that we thought to do because we didn't particuarly like it, but as we wanted to visited the jungle, and all the treks included the activity, we thought that maybe we would do it. It was then when we began to look into the elephants, and it was a surprise when we discovered that elephants can only carry on over their back 100 kg, and the chair weight alone is 50 kg. It was a big surprise. It was so sad to learn, we read that elephants are in many cases abused and thus we decided not to do it.

During our stay in the north, in a a city called Chiang Mai, we tried to arrange a trek in the jungle that did not include the riding of elephants. When we were ready to avoid doing this activity, fortunately, we found a trekking that did not include this activity. We made a trekking for two days and it was amazing.

In addition we found a recovery rehabilitation centre of elephants that had suffered abuse. We visited it and enjoyed feeding and washing them in a respectful enviroment.

Thank you very much for your time. Please excuse my awfull english. I promised that I would attempt to improve it.


See you!

 

 

 

 

Qué buena tu escritura. Entendí todo que escribiste. Mis correciones no cambian el significado de la escritura, pero simplemente la hacen un traduccion más natural, como lo que un nativo escribiría

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