Notebook #1
청명(QingMing Festival)은 4월 4일에 입니다.
QingMing Festival is on 4th April.
우리가 보통 더 일찍 일주에 가고, 우리도 매년 가다.
We usually go by one week earlier, and we go every year.
오늘 아침에 우리의 가족이 기념하기로 공동묘지를 갔다.
On today morning, our family went to the cemetery to commemorate.
우리가 여덟시 정각부터 가는 것 시작하고, 아홉시에 도착했다.
We started going from eight o'clock sharp, and arrived at nine o'clock.
그렇지만 날씨가 너무 더웠다.
However, the weather was too hot.
우리가 양초, 과일하고 차, 선조를 바쁜 준비하고 있었어다.
We were busy preparing candles, fruits, and tea for the ancestor.
더 기다리고 후에, 우리는 열두시에 떠났다.
After more waiting, we left at twelve o'clock.
좋은 가족모임 있었다!
It was a good family gathering!
Seems like there are a lot of mistakes, thanks in advance! :3
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Notebook #1
청명(QingMing Festival)은 4월 4일에 있다.
QingMing Festival is on 4th April.
우리는 보통 더 한 주 더 일찍 일주에 가고, 우리도 매년 간다.
We usually go by one week earlier, and we go every year.
오늘 아침에 우리 가족은 오늘 아침에 기념하기로을 하러 공동묘지에 갔다.
On today morning, our family went to the cemetery to commemorate.
우리가는 여덟시에 떠났고 정각부터 가는 것 시작하고, 아홉시에 도착했다.
We started going from eight o'clock sharp, and arrived at nine o'clock.
그렇지만 날씨가 너무 더웠다.
However, the weather was too hot.
우리가는 양초, 과일하고 차, 선조를 바쁜 준비하느라 바빴다.있었어다.
We were busy preparing candles, fruits, and tea for the ancestor.
더 기다리고난 후에, 우리는 열두시에 떠났다.
After more waiting, we left at twelve o'clock.
좋은 가족모임 있이었다!
It was a good family gathering!
Seems like there are a lot of mistakes, thanks in advance! :3
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