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Ohanami Japanese watch cherry blossom during spring. It's call "Ohanami". The famous spot in Tokyo is Yoyogi park. There is Yoyogi park near Harajuku station. Very many people gather When Cherry blossoms bloom. People put blue sheet from morning to resarve place. and buy lunch box , alcohol drink. When I went Ohanami strong wind and fly small sand. My body connect small sand :( did you habit to Ohanami(watch spring flower to gather) in your conutry? thank you for reading my sentence :)

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Ohanami

The Japanese watch cherry blossoms during spring.
It's called "Ohanami".
The famous spot in Tokyo is Yoyogi park.
There is Yoyogi park is located near close to Harajuku station.
Very many A lot of people gather when Cherry blossoms are blooming.
People put lay out blue sheets from in the morning to resarve reserve a spot place.
and Then they buy lunch boxes and alcoholic drinks.
When I went Ohanami, there were strong winds and fly small sand was blown everywhere.
My body connect was covered with small sand :(

did you habit Do you have a tradition similar to Ohanami (such as watching the spring flower togather together) in your conutry?

Thank you for reading my sentences :)

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Ohanami

The Japanese watch view cherry blossoms during spring. It's call "Ohanami". It is better to say, Viewing cherry blossoms during spring is /known as Ohanami/called Ohanami by the Japanese/.


There is a famous spot in Tokyo, is the Yoyogi Park, There is Yoyogi park near the Harajuku Station.
Very many people Crowds will gather when Cherry blossoms the blooms start. People put Blue picnic sheets  from in the morning to reserve save their place. [I found this out from the link under, Ueno Park.  http://www.japan-guide.com/blog/sakura14/140326_tokyo.html]

Then they will go and buy get their bento lunch boxes and perhaps some , alcohol too drink.

 

When I went to the Ohanami,  strong the wind was strong and fly small particles of sand.
My body connect small sand :( were blowing everywhere and I was blasted by them!

did Do you habit to Ohanami(watch spring flower to gather) similar custom of viewing flowers in your conutry?

Thank you for reading.  my sentence :)

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(Ed: My first correction omitted the words about "blue sheets" -- it's been corrected below):

 

The Japanese love to view the cherry blossoms in the spring. They call it "Ohanami." The most famous spot in Tokyo for Ohanami is Yogogi Park near Harajuku station. Thousands of people gather when the cherry trees bloom. They place blue tarps on the grass early in the morning to save a place. They bring lunch to the park, and strong drink. During this year's Ohanami a strong gust covered me in fine sand. Do people gather to watch the spring flowers bloom in your country? Do you have such a custom? Thank you for reading my sentences.

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The Japanese love to view the cherry blossoms in the spring. They call it "Ohanami." The most famous spot in Tokyo for Ohanami is Yogogi Park near Harajuku station. Thousands of people gather when the cherry trees bloom. They bring lunch to the park, and strong drink. During this year's Ohanami a strong wind covered me in fine sand. Do people gather to watch the spring flowers bloom in your country? Do you have such a custom? Thank you for reading my sentences.

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>ms sam yes thank. I enjoy to Ohanami :)

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