school

Despite the fact that I registered italki pretty long time ago, it is my first time to write note.
I will write about my school in Korea.
My school,unfortunatully unfortunately is a boy's only school which is pretty common in Korea. I wear uniforms, study, and play with my friends. No problems... so far. However there is one thing I really dislike; a hair regulation. They regulate student's hair length and force them to cut their hair and if not, they punish students. I should change my profile because I cut my hair too. I have a dinner at school , which is pretty common for all Korean students. I go back home at 9 every day... Sometimes I feel like escaping from the school.

There was only a few errors, your english is very good. 잘 했어요~

School

Despite the fact that I registered on  italki a pretty long time ago, this  it is the my first time I have to write written a note.
I will write about my school in Korea.
My school, unfortunatully, is a boys' school which is pretty common in Korea. I wear a uniforms, study, and play with my friends. There have been no problems...so far. However there is one thing I really dislike and that's the A hair regulation. They regulate the length of our hair student's hair length and force us them to cut it their hair and if we dont' we are punishednot, they punish students.. I should change my profile because I have cut my hair too. I have a dinner at school, which is pretty common for all Korean students. I go back return home at 9 every evening day.. Sometimes I feel like escaping from the school.

School

Despite the fact that I registered on italki pretty long time ago, this is my first time to write a note.
I will write about my school in Korea.

My school, unfortunately, is a boy school which is pretty common in Korea. I wear uniforms, study, and play with my friends. No problems so far. However, there is one thing I really dislike. A hair regulation. They regulate student's hair length and force them to cut their hair and if not, they punish students.. I should change my profile because I cut my hair too. I have a dinner at school ,which is pretty common for all Korean students.I go back home at 9 every day.. Sometimes I feel like escaping from the school.