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My diary
Today is I began diary first day. "Today I began my diary." or "Today is the first day that I wrote a diary."
Today is I felt very bad, because today my country is rainy.
I said "you are very hateful rain!" in my mind.
I watched a TV drama at a later time.(it is an English drama) or "Later, I watched a TV drama."
I ate 2 onigiri at a noon. Generally, we spell out small numbers like 2. So in this case "I ate two onigiri at a noon."
and I went to bed at 11:30 pm.
Do not start sentences with "And". If you want to use "and" you need to combine the two thoughts into one sentence. "I ate two onigiri at noon, and then I went to bed.
see you! ((((((((((っ・ω・)っ buuun!
Good luck with your English studies!
My diary
Today is I began diary first day.
Today is the first day of my diary.
Today is I felt very bad, because today my country is rainy.
Today I felt very bad, because it was raining here.
I'm seid "you are very hateful rein!" in my mind.
I said "You are very awful rain!" to myself.
I watch TVdrama at a later time.(it is English drama)
Later, I watched a TV show. It was an English drama.
I ate 2 onigiri at a noon.
and I go to bed 11:30 pm.
I will go to bed at 11:30pm.
see you! ((((((((((っ・ω・)っ buuun!
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