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My diary Today is I began diary first day. Today is I felt very bad, because today my country is rainy. I'm seid "you are very hateful rein!" in my mind. I watch TVdrama at a later time.(it is English drama) I ate 2 onigiri at a noon. and I go to bed 11:30 pm. see you! ((((((((((っ・ω・)っ buuun!

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My diary

Today is I began diary first day.     "Today I began my diary." or "Today is the first day that I wrote a diary."

Today is I felt very bad, because today my country is rainy.

I said "you are very hateful rain!" in my mind.

I watched a TV drama at a later time.(it is an English drama)   or   "Later, I watched a TV drama."

I ate 2 onigiri at a noon.     Generally, we spell out small numbers like 2. So in this case "I ate two onigiri at a noon."

and I went to bed at 11:30 pm.        

 

Do not start sentences with "And". If you want to use "and" you need to combine the two thoughts into one sentence.   "I ate two onigiri at noon, and then I went to bed.

see you! ((((((((((っ・ω・)っ buuun!

 

Good luck with your English studies!

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My diary

Today is I began diary first day.

Today is the first day of my diary. 

Today is I felt very bad, because today my country is rainy.

Today I felt very bad, because it was raining here. 

I'm seid "you are very hateful rein!" in my mind.

I said "You are very awful rain!" to myself. 


I watch TVdrama at a later time.(it is English drama)

Later, I watched a TV show. It was an English drama. 
I ate 2 onigiri at a noon.

and I go to bed 11:30 pm.

I will go to bed at 11:30pm. 

see you! ((((((((((っ・ω・)っ buuun!

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