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"The piano" I saw the movie "The piano" by Jane Campion yesterday in the evening... It was the most emotional film in my life after " Jane Air" 2011... It is unusual love story of a speechless woman, playing on her piano, and a her husbands friend. Ada got married on the calculation and she didn`t love her husband. But his frind fell in love...

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"The Piano"

I saw the movie "The Piano" by Jane Campion yesterday in the evening [1]... It was the most emotional film I have seen in my life, except for "Jane Eyre" (2011). 
It is an unusual love story about a woman pianist who is unable to speak, and about her husband's friend. Ada got married calculatedly, without loving her husband. But his friend fell in love...

 

[1]  Good variants:  "... Campion last evening."  "... Campion last night."

 

 

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"The piano"

I saw the movie "The piano" by Jane Campion yesterday in the evening... It was the most emotional film in my life after " Jane Air" 2011...
It is unusual love story of a speechless woman, playing on her piano, and a her husbands friend. Ada got married on the calculation and she didn`t love her husband. But his friend fell in love...

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it is a wonderful movie.

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