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my disease well, today i like tell them about my disease. this a little rare. it called celiac disease, do you know ? this is a like allergic disease at some food, especifically wheat. I can't eat bread made with wheat flower. Once a week I made my bread with corn and rice flower.

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My Disease

well, Today I would like to tell them you about my disease.
this It is a little rare. It is called celiac disease. do you know ? Have you heard of it?

this It is a like an allergy disease at to some foods, especifically wheat. I can't eat bread made with wheat flower. Once a week I make my bread with corn and rice flower.

 

If you live in the big cities of the US, it is much easier now to find gluten-free foods than it was ten years ago.

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my disease

Well, today i would like to tell them you about my disease.
this The disease is a little rare. It is called celiac disease, do you know have you heard of it?

this It is a like an allergic disease reaction at towards some food, especifically (especially OR specifically) wheat. I can't eat bread made with wheat flower. Once a week, I made make my bread with corn and rice flower.

 

 

'Escpecially' and 'specifically' both work grammatically, but I don't know of Celiac Disease, so I can't tell if the allergic reaction is only with wheat, or commonly with wheat.

 

Happy learning! :)

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Hi, I have one correction to add to Daniel's excellent correction. Flour vs flower is a common English typo because they sound the same. A flower is what you would find in a garden and flour is what you bake with. 

 

I'm sorry about your celiac disease! That must be hard in a country without the same awareness. Good luck! 

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