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My Disease
well, Today I would like to tell them you about my disease.
this It is a little rare. It is called celiac disease. do you know ? Have you heard of it?
this It is a like an allergy disease at to some foods, especifically wheat. I can't eat bread made with wheat flower. Once a week I make my bread with corn and rice flower.
If you live in the big cities of the US, it is much easier now to find gluten-free foods than it was ten years ago.
my disease
Well, today i would like to tell them you about my disease.
this The disease is a little rare. It is called celiac disease, do you know have you heard of it?
this It is a like an allergic disease reaction at towards some food, especifically (especially OR specifically) wheat. I can't eat bread made with wheat flower. Once a week, I made make my bread with corn and rice flower.
'Escpecially' and 'specifically' both work grammatically, but I don't know of Celiac Disease, so I can't tell if the allergic reaction is only with wheat, or commonly with wheat.
Happy learning! :)
Hi, I have one correction to add to Daniel's excellent correction. Flour vs flower is a common English typo because they sound the same. A flower is what you would find in a garden and flour is what you bake with.
I'm sorry about your celiac disease! That must be hard in a country without the same awareness. Good luck!
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